|Reviews for Twilight With a Twist, Kinda|
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/15
2 majors flaw in your scenario:
- she show herself to Lauren so it means that Lauren will think of it and Edward would have seen it in her mind
- jaguar is a specie that doesn't exist in Canada and they are protected because they are quite rare nowadays
| Emmaline341 chapter 20 . 1/31/2015
I love your 'sassy Bella'! I'm starting t hunt good 'strong Bella' stories and I really enjoyed yours.
| jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
keep it up
| mad ggg chapter 2 . 10/21/2014
ok so bella goes to jacob black's house and she says, "jacob did i tell you that you are my shingo!" "what the f**k are you talking about?" he asked. she said " i hate to break this to you but i love you more than edward" "really!" he asked. "YES AND I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART!" Then they kissed. Just then edward came in, "WHAT THE F**K BELLA I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME MORE THAN THIS CREEP!" "OF COURSE I DO I WAS JUST KIDDING ABOUT THAT KISS GET AWAY FROM ME YOU CREEP YOU FREAK ME OUT".
| Fancyunicorn chapter 20 . 3/12/2014
WHY DEDIE KONG END IT LIKE THE INCREDIBLES?
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/12/2013
sometimes you confused me, but i really liked it but couldn't Bella erase everything from their mind? and imprinting?
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/1/2012
wow soooooo awesome!
| ahaha chapter 4 . 5/8/2012
she cries so easily... um i really think you could have thought of something more...consistent to get her and Edward closer
| S M Wilshire chapter 14 . 7/12/2011
i'm kinda confused why did she need to shift to human to explain to the Cullens if she can talked when she's a jaguar?
| Monica chapter 20 . 6/27/2011
Great Story! I hope u get to write more.
| Rhianna chapter 20 . 5/2/2011
OMG i love this one; i never got bored of it and i think your writing was amazing :) Thanks for sharing x
| jilightbookworm chapter 20 . 4/26/2011
Really great story!
| lilreddevil1283 chapter 20 . 10/4/2010
omg!i luv ur story!u shud soo write a seaqual!
| vampires are awesome chapter 19 . 8/9/2010
plz plz update i neeeeeddddddd to know what happens plz for me i nnnnneeeedddd to know right now plz update i am addicted i need to know the ending of every story i read so you need to update soon or i will die of massive heart failure thks to u so plz update cuz i need to know right now thks ;]
plz update soon cuz i really like ur storys i myself am a author but i hav trouble updating cuz i hardly got the time with school and sports practices after school it just so cool to see authors who got the time plz reply if you can vamps out.
| shay chapter 19 . 8/2/2010
love all the chapter so far. i can't wait for the others.