|Reviews for Against Destiny|
| Iwritestupid chapter 33 . 12/23/2016
This story. This story, man. I'm typing this at 2:00 AM. I've spent a whole day reading this, and I can confidently say that I don't regret a second! You are an ABSOLUTELY AMAZING WRITER! You really should write books for a living. You're DESTINED to! That was a bad joke. Anyway, keep writing, and stay cool.
| Superdale33 chapter 2 . 7/25/2016
You need an editor to look over this story. I couldn't get past the first two scenes because of the run on sentences and confusing sentence structure. There's a story here, I can feel it, but readers have to put in extra work just to simply read what's going on, and you want to avoid that.
| Kocainum chapter 32 . 7/14/2016
Well I'm glad it worked out in the end... Would have been overly depressing, had they not been able to be reunited in some way..
Great work of art here.
| Kocainum chapter 30 . 7/13/2016
and all life burned happily ever after, the end...
| Kocainum chapter 29 . 7/13/2016
man this is the best, i do hope somehow rena does end up rejecting the kid, whether it's from mind control or just insane amount of torturous pain. while its not like i really want that to happen, andrew seems like he often never makes a plan before rushing into to something. and not that i can blame him entirely, but hes the one with the digivice and he has only BARELY used the thing like twice, inside of outside of battle.
honestly for being a so called 'tamer', it seems he has not given any thought into the piece of equipment that is capable is fixing nearly every painful issue they have faced. its frustrating that he's so likable when they are having their 'moments' but so unprepared when it comes to battles because he never attempts to learn about the item that brought them together to begin with...
RIP common sense
| Kocainum chapter 28 . 7/13/2016
that's fucked up...
| Kocainum chapter 26 . 7/13/2016
THAT. WAS. LEGENDARY.
Amazing immersive quality. One of the best damn dream sequence nightmares I've read in a long time!
Insanely awesome chapter!
| Kocainum chapter 25 . 7/13/2016
poor andrew... what a cruel dream...
| Kocainum chapter 24 . 7/13/2016
This chapter ending was the best-y bestest part of the entire story so far! I loved toooo much!
| Kocainum chapter 23 . 7/13/2016
vaguely reminded me of lotr with those nightmares... cool
| Kocainum chapter 22 . 7/13/2016
neat. would never have thought she would end up joining them in some way... poor rena is gunna have so much jealousy in her future.
| Kocainum chapter 20 . 7/13/2016
really sad he still doesn't know 'exactly' how to use the digivice yet or even attempted to train with it... oh well.
| Kocainum chapter 19 . 7/13/2016
lack of communication is what destroys most friendships... sad they didn't talk more on the subject...
| Kocainum chapter 13 . 7/12/2016
oh neat! another actual human!
| Kocainum chapter 12 . 7/12/2016
poor tex... he reminds me of victor, that friendly texan securitron from good springs in fallout new vegas..
sad, but great chapter!