|Reviews for Against Destiny|
| Superdale33 chapter 2 . 7/25
You need an editor to look over this story. I couldn't get past the first two scenes because of the run on sentences and confusing sentence structure. There's a story here, I can feel it, but readers have to put in extra work just to simply read what's going on, and you want to avoid that.
| Kocainum chapter 32 . 7/14
Well I'm glad it worked out in the end... Would have been overly depressing, had they not been able to be reunited in some way..
Great work of art here.
| Kocainum chapter 30 . 7/13
and all life burned happily ever after, the end...
| Kocainum chapter 29 . 7/13
man this is the best, i do hope somehow rena does end up rejecting the kid, whether it's from mind control or just insane amount of torturous pain. while its not like i really want that to happen, andrew seems like he often never makes a plan before rushing into to something. and not that i can blame him entirely, but hes the one with the digivice and he has only BARELY used the thing like twice, inside of outside of battle.
honestly for being a so called 'tamer', it seems he has not given any thought into the piece of equipment that is capable is fixing nearly every painful issue they have faced. its frustrating that he's so likable when they are having their 'moments' but so unprepared when it comes to battles because he never attempts to learn about the item that brought them together to begin with...
RIP common sense
| Kocainum chapter 28 . 7/13
that's fucked up...
| Kocainum chapter 26 . 7/13
THAT. WAS. LEGENDARY.
Amazing immersive quality. One of the best damn dream sequence nightmares I've read in a long time!
Insanely awesome chapter!
| Kocainum chapter 25 . 7/13
poor andrew... what a cruel dream...
| Kocainum chapter 24 . 7/13
This chapter ending was the best-y bestest part of the entire story so far! I loved toooo much!
| Kocainum chapter 23 . 7/13
vaguely reminded me of lotr with those nightmares... cool
| Kocainum chapter 22 . 7/13
neat. would never have thought she would end up joining them in some way... poor rena is gunna have so much jealousy in her future.
| Kocainum chapter 20 . 7/13
really sad he still doesn't know 'exactly' how to use the digivice yet or even attempted to train with it... oh well.
| Kocainum chapter 19 . 7/13
lack of communication is what destroys most friendships... sad they didn't talk more on the subject...
| Kocainum chapter 13 . 7/12
oh neat! another actual human!
| Kocainum chapter 12 . 7/12
poor tex... he reminds me of victor, that friendly texan securitron from good springs in fallout new vegas..
sad, but great chapter!
| Kocainum chapter 10 . 7/12
What a sweet scene between those two, really glad this is mostly from renas pov... So nice to see her deeper thoughts on the situation.