Reviews for Mai's Eyes
Illaeshin chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Oh very nice. I like the detail and descriptions. I think you wrote their personalities and thoughts very well.

The switching of POV was a tad confusing towards the middle, but nothing major.

The pic that inspired this is also very good. I recommend putting a link to it at the end, with your AN.

Over all, I like. ~ Well done. ~
tweetyberd chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
squee* HAII! I LUF IT!

:D Ur so good at writing *_* I can liek, think of stories, but I'm not good at writing them out 'xDD
things24 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
I love it! It's a sweet Zuko/Mai moment.
Cassie James chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
This was cute. I enjoyed it!

There were a few mistakes, it could do with a proof read/spellcheck, but otherwise it was very good!

Cassie x
Mairead Lee chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I love it I love it I love it I love it! (This is Arelia-Dawn, by the way D) It isn't like some Maiko fanfics out there-it's nicely written without being overloaded with fancy adjectives and descriptions . Everyone was in character. I'm so glad my picture inspired this! D
gloomy maiko lover chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I really really liked this loved this. I hope you update or instead do another one shot with Maiko or a story with alot of chapter's with Maiko so anyway you did a great,awsome,wonderful,wonderful job. as always and always will do so again great job. xD xD
Millie chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Aw so sweet. I really like it. Is it a oneshot or will you update another chapter. I would love to see more.
Kimjuni2 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Aw I love this, the maikoness is awesome. When they hugged in the final episode, well i wanted to know what they would do after their hug and you did that. That's really cool. I love the whole chapter, do you update?

Anyway great job !