Haha, I loved it. Even if you said it wasn't funny, it had some humour in there. :) And it's good to hear that I am not the only one obsessed with Fax. Or Fang. (FANG! Mmmmmmm...)

...I'll just read the next chapter now...

Come on, why didn't you just change the rating?

Wait...

We get pie? I want pie! Pie is the bestest!

Pweety pwease? *insert Bambi-eyes here*

OMG! I loved it! It was, by far, the best almost-lemon I've ever read on this site!

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I am a die-hard Fax-fangirl, so keep up with the Fax!

Hey, that was really good! It made me laugh, even when you said this wasn't supposed to be humorous...but hey, you did it anyways! Great story, especially with the hotness of Fang...mmm. Nice, hot Fang in the morning.

I know you posted this a while ago, but I still wanted to review. Fax is great when it's done well, and you did it perfectly! Ah, teenage emotions...I hope you plan on updating!

good story. hey...where's my pie? u said I get pie! lol update please!

do another chappie pwease

I love FAX and this story could get very interesting please write more!

Well what are you waiting for? START writing so you can update soon. LIKE REALY SOON BECAUSE I TOTALLY LOVE IT!