|Reviews for The best present|
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
| tryntee13 chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Love love Love
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
| kyil chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I was a little unsure of usagi and mamoru's relationship at the beginning. kinda hard to tell were they together yet or not...it took about til half the fic before I could see they were together. Another confusing part was the jump between present and past. You labeled the present, but never tell the readers when you jump back into the past.
But it was a rather nice little fic. I enjoyed the scenes of usagi and mamoru's past. The ending at the actual party was also very sweet.
My last confusion is...was the party for usagi or mamoru? At the beginning I thought it was for usagi than during the party I found myself doubting it. So who was the party for?