|Reviews for The Third Forgotten|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/20
Warning! Carry on reading! Or ************, even just read the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she live in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to killed all the staff in the hospital, so the More-government decided that the bebest way to get rid of her was to kill her, so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now ever week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, cutting you and watching you bleed to death
| ninjawolf2018 chapter 3 . 7/21/2014
continue please! you can't just leave it at that! y u so mean D:
please update !
| Neo-MrAnderson chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
dude... update... like seriously. I'll cry if you dont...
| Pheobe Arocis chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Please continue this story!
| jesi ki kage chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
so... very interested right now. this was not a scenario i had though of when seeing the movie but i must say it has great potential. please keep up the good work and update soon. -Jesi Ki Kage
| 20080634 chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
great story so far are you going to finish it.
| FANOFJOLINASPUFFY chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
thanx for the update...a good old family REUNION! very much looking forward to this...)...was wondering where u went off to?
| Xosaint chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Nice story you have here ]. Its great, its sad to see that not that many people write hancock stories. Anyways please proceed in updating. Cant wait to see how this story develops overtime. Take care hehehe
| FANOFJOLINASPUFFY chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
oh PLZ PLZ UPDATE!
im loving it so farr n thanxx for the review on the other hancock story it lead me here...but yd U stop...its getting super interesting and im loving the concept...i wanna know MORE lol...PLZZZZZZ
| CuriousKitty chapter 2 . 3/2/2010
wow I just stumbled apon this piece and i love your concept, I really wnat to see were you are heading with this, and see more into the background of this kid!
| Isfelvic chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Finish it xD Come on! This story could be great! I could get some of my readers to check it out if you like.
| Julielein chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
I would like to read more.
| SuperKayJin chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Wow this is a nice Fic. I like the setup and the dialogue between the two.
This has the potential to be a great story and I hope you continue to work on it. I think with the Hancock mythology set to grow in the next few years its going to be interesting to see how things pan out.
Who knows they might even drop in here and take a good idea like yours :-)