|Reviews for Shattered Moon Part 1: Pieces of a Shattered Moon|
| JePi chapter 4 . 8/10/2013
I noticethat you like byakuya combing renji's hair...
| Shizukana Yuki chapter 7 . 7/16/2013
This is sooooooo good! You, my friend, are the best author of ByaRen stories in the whole universe! I love it when you make Bya all vulnerable like that! Haha, got the genders of the zanpakutos wrong, as Zabimaru is actually a furred woman with a pink-haired boy chained to her waist and Senbonzakura is actually a male samurai warrior. Oh well, I know that's cos the Zanpakuto Rebellion Arc wasn't out yet when this chapter was uploaded, probably. Don't worry, I woulda thought Zabimaru was a guy and Senbonzakura was a girl too if not for that arc of the anime.
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 4 . 6/25/2011
ooo i het it now it's like the other one but w/ romantical advances...hmm i like this one as well
| nekoanimegirl114 chapter 3 . 2/16/2011
I JUST THOUGHT OF SOMETHING! I can picture you as this hollow that appears before Byakuya! Flowing red hair, mesmerizing. I bet if Byakuya was real and attacked you, you'd absorb his attack with your magic-Spunky powers and then, when weakened, you'd throw him to the ground and "attack". Yup.
| ishala8 chapter 15 . 1/20/2011
I loved a certain mischievious feline's involvement, the pairing and the plot! Somehow, you have managed to include a particular artful and fresh quality to all the images and events you portrayed in this fic. It's refined and refreshing, making it so that even rapes can pass by without sounding vulgar. I have to admit to greatly enjoying the read so all that remains is to thank you for all your hard work. Thanks!
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
That Yoruichi, She just loves to mess with Byakuya. And Renji didn't help either by joining in on the teasing. Awww, Use to blush when he saw Yoruichi bare.
Oh, That's soooooo great that there might be a chance that Byakuya and Renji could have a child and of there own blood. But there going to need one more person, A women... I wonder who they might pick if it's going to happen?
Ugh! I HATE those coucil members! They are so rude and have no respect for the dead. How could they say such a thing about Hisana. Of course Byakuya was going to show them not to mess with who he loves. Yeah, you go Byakuya!:)
So... Renji got to feel how comfortable Byakuya's bed is... Hrmmm...
Great chapter Lady SpunkyOne!XD
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 13 . 12/12/2010
I love how they got into a little fight and that they ended up making up in the end! I think in the end, Byakuya is really worried about the relationship and how it will go from there. He's also extermely nervous about the elders and what they have to say about all of the things Byakuya is doing with his personal life. There so nosy. There actually starting to act like a real couple now.:) Can't wait to see where this goes...
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 12 . 12/12/2010
That was such an intersting chapter! Soooooo Good!XD
I love the battle scene, You did a really nice job of writing it and I could play it out in my head beautifully! Aizen Baby almost killed Byakuya! Good thing he didn't! Renji was so brave to protect Byakuya from that blow. He's so amazing!
I really thought Aizen and Gin had it won but with Byakuya's quick thinking, He did that flash step that he learned from Yoruichi and that really saved there lives.
Byakuya lost alot of blood... He really needs to rest up. I loved how Byakuya kissed Renji in front of those people, It's like he doesn't care anymore, That's soooo sweet!:)
Now I wonder if there going to tell the elders...
I love how Byakuya tells Renji to "Shut up" Too cute!XD
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 11 . 12/12/2010
That's so noble of Renji. He didn't care that he was tortured or raped that he expected that to happen and he got over it quickley. But the thought of Byakuya being touched by anybody eles forcebly, It worries him so much. He loves him alot you could tell.:D
I'm so glad that Renji broke out of the spell! Byakuya is right! love is stronger than any bad spell, LOVE CONQUERS ALL! *Giggles* I couldn't help
No, Byakuya and Renji can't trust Aizen Baby, He's as twisted as ever and will say anything to get his way. So don't give in you two! And that's exactly what there doing, Running the fuck out of there!:D
Great chappie My Lady, This is starting to get real intersting...
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 10 . 12/12/2010
So sad, Byakuya being tortured, And Renji being there to aid Gin to hurt him must be awful! Especially when his mind is still very aware.
But he saw the gleam in Renji's eyes, There is still hope! Renji keep fighting!
Aizen Baby said that everything changed and that he wants Byakuya to become enslaved to him... He's so
That Gin he has nerve to go in there and try to take advantage of Byakuya like that. Good thing Renji was there to kick his ass and make him leave with his dick between his legs still wanting a piece of that ass. *Laughs* Too funny!:)
In the end it's good that Byakuya is hopeful and that there's a chance they could make it out okay. Still wondering where Yoruichi went?
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 9 . 12/12/2010
Renji is right, They are screwed!
Thst fight with the hollow was pretty intense. But at least Byakuya managed.
So THAT'S what Aizen Baby did to Renji, He's controlling Renji's moves but Renji still has his thoughts. That's a good thing, Maybe he could fight the control off?
Where did Yoruichi go? That's very strange...
I can't wait to read on!
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 8 . 12/11/2010
poor Renji, He's being tortured and all these horrible things are just happening to him... But all of the time he's being tortured he cannot stop thinking of Byakuya. He's so loyal...
I love how the women are teasing Byakuya, Too funny!XD but they love him so.
Oh yeah! Aizen Baby made his grand apperance, Hrmmmmmm... What did Aizen do to Renji? Did he... Oh no... Renji...
Intersting chapter! Too Good!:)
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 7 . 12/11/2010
That Byakuya sure got mad over that tea. Poor Renji, Had to endure the little mood swing. But in the end, Renji did good not to hurt him.:)
I love how Renji is giving "Lessons" to Byakuya so that he could be better. *Giggles*
Yea, I wonder how the Seritite is going to take the relationship, That is if they plan to say anything at all. And Byakuya is the one who has it the hardest, So I'm not sure how that's going to work out.
Where did that hollow witch come from? Oh on! Renji is in trouble! And she says that she wants to play, Byakuya I hope that you like to play games, Because your going to need to be good at this one and order to find Renji.
On to the next!XD
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 6 . 12/11/2010
Too cute of a chapter!XD
So Byakuya was scared to love again because he fears if he gets to close he would lose anyone that he came close to. And from what he said about all the people who died or left him, It's understandable that he would feel that pain. I know how scary that can be too.
I loved everything Renji said to Byakuya. It really was encourging for Byakuya and he really needed that. I also thought what Hisana said to him was so unselfish of her to tell him that if there was a chance to be happy, To reach for it.
Now Renji and Byakuya are in this together and as long as they have eachother they could be strong. I'm so glad that Byakuya took that chance. So I wonder... Will he get his powers back?
| Genesis Beautiful Soul chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
That was such a great chapter!
I loved how Zabimaru had to give some lessons to Renji, Because he could really be clueless sometimes, He just needs some guidance, And what better person to tell him than Zabimaru!XD
Ouch... Zabimaru really is brave to have strike down Byakuya the way he did. I'm not sure if he's mad about it though?
I hope the "Direct path" That Renji is talking about will help Byakuya get his powers back. What a nice way to get them back by making love! Too sweet!:)