Reviews for Breaking Point
BlueEveningOwl chapter 3 . 5/7/2014
This was unbeliveably disturbing and horrifying. It was definitely well written (because it literally made me sick to my stomach), but that is sadly the only good thing I can say about this chapter. If you wanted me to hate John then you succeeded. But I kind of doubt that was your intention ...
Silverthreads chapter 3 . 9/30/2009
Your Sheppard is as bad as Zuggat. I have absolutely no empathy for him.
Terri chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
MAGNIFICENT! BRAVO! TERRIFIC! ::Terri claps her hands.:: It shows how far John would go for payback. It was very true to the character.

On one episode, John told Teyla that he would do anything for his team, even Rodney. They also showed that he would do anything for espcially Rodney later on. This story was dead on with the characters.

Many congrats.

E. Nagrom chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
Wow I won't be able to see John in the same light again...

Well done got shivers up my spine in the torture scene

iamkagomeiloveinuyasha chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
Should i be disturbed that i find John's brutality way sweet and totally hot?

loved it! :)
Wapeci chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
Chocolate Cheesecake! My fav! YAY! XD


XD Really awesome! I love how you discribe how John felt in the end (that he'd become a dark silent man who had grimly stalked the halls of Atlantis, planning revenge) just love it! And how have Rodney now and the bastard gone made thing better.

I hope you do more like this one! So GREAT! !
deblease chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
Good ending for the bad guy. Good story.
mercurys winter chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
glad you decided to continue it! awesome job can't wait to see what happens next
mercurys winter chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
omg love it so far! great job!
crusoe89 chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
Yipee - you added more! Really enjoyed the latest chapter and looking forward to the conclusion. Thanks!
Terri chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
I am so glad that you continued this story. You are correct. McKay warned that Sheppard would kill the Empir, and he should. Unfortunately, Sheppard will have to make it fast instead of slow. He would want to get back to Rodney.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
ElisaD263 chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
YAY! So glad you decided to go on with this story!

Another great chapter! Teyla,'s all good!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
ElisaD263 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Oh, wow! That was good! Rodney going through torture, but apologizing to the guy because Sheppard was going to kill!

Going on to the next chapter!
deblease chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
All of us good writters hear the voices, they will not stop until you write. Still going good can't wait for next chapter!
angw chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
Poor Rodney. Rescued at last. I liked the story.
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