Reviews for One Little Day
KimmyChii chapter 1 . 8/5/2016
This is very good written!
That's Amazing chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
So, the top shows that if Kyon died, if one special little person died, Haruhi would go hell crazy in sadness, Japan would be torn apart, half of the WORLD would be torn apart, Mikuru would have probably went back to the future in sorrow, Yuki would have broken or something, and pretty much everybody would die.

On the bottom, Nagato saves him.
The world is saved, all because one highschooler survived an attack.
2.6 million/10
marduk-report chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
very very good.

the punchy, stark style you use really does hit very hard, which is obviously what you were going for here.
ScarletEdge98 chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
What if they did a movie abut Kyon disappearing? That would be really interesting.
pomelo-potato chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
i was trying to find some tragedy happenings and mishaps like this! 5 stars...
lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Great work on this.
Yami Vizzini chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
One heck of a dark ride! I wish I could have seen more of what was happening, but the minimal detail actually accentuates the horror.
Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
That was INTENSE! Great job! This is an awesome 'what if'!
KazuSakai chapter 1 . 7/5/2011

Love the twists and turns of the timeline..

As if Mikuru Asahina disappeared from the furure, maikng her an inexistent being in the past only having Kyon to9 remember her.

It is quite good for a tragedy, though..
Durandall chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I really can't understand what part of this is dark or tragic...

I enjoyed it - I really did - but what's bad? It's a glimpse of a time-plane that was replaced. It acknowledges that canon overrides the darker possibilities.

Yeah, I just don't get any lingering feelings of sadness and depression over this. It's great, though! Interestingly, I wrote the same concept (made pointlessly lengthier). In retrospect now, I must have been inspired by this...
APG66 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Fantastic story. I love how it shows how important Kyon is in a specific way rather than just the vague notion of his importance to Haruhi, if you get what I mean. By which I'm trying to say you did a great job showing HOW Kyon is essential to the world rather than just the why. Also on a humorus note, to me at least, because of the line about him representing the common man, I can't help but picture Kyon as some sort of communist figurehead like Lenin or a funny mental image to me .
Hat O' Doom chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Great story!
Inumaru12 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Wow, this is pretty twisted (which is good) 3 it. :)

shanejayell chapter 1 . 10/17/2010

So in the reboot Nagato knows what happened, I presume.

DAMN good fic.
Mr. Thumbsup chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
This is the shortest Haruhi fanfic I've ever read, yet... it's also the only fic that has ever hit me the hardest. Bravo, sir. This is going straight into my "Masterpiece" folder.
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