|Reviews for Gold Hair and Lightning|
| QueenOfHyperbole chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I really liked #4, especially the following part.
“Doofus,” Mary said seriously, “I just woke up from surgery and we have a shooter to track down.” Her hand was warm on his. “If I told this person now, he’d go crazy and start spouting off stupid, random facts and he’d probably cry a little, because he’s a big wuss, and then he’d have to tell my boss and make us celebrate with pie.”
I can picture Mary saying this, and I can picture Marshall doing all of these things. Very nice.
| Iluvdolphins chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
I loved the idea of this story! It just made me really sad that Mary didn't make it :( Great job and I loved Sophia at the end too :D
| superwoman1015 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
I liked these for the most part. I didn't really care for the second wake up, mainly because Mary does call Jinx mom, often. Sure she calls her Jinx when talking about her to Marshall, but when Mary's talking to her, generally, she's calling her mom. I think I really enjoyed the third one, and the last one, the death, that was different that I expected it to be, and I liked that.