Reviews for LoveFool
Vi ChaN91312 chapter 15 . 4/11/2014
I think I read this before but I forgot if I review or not

But this story so awesome and sad! I almost crying in the crowd haha
HoPe-BriNgeR1 chapter 15 . 3/19/2014
I hate you, I really really hate you for killing namine( just kidding sorry)
Its just I'm really sad that namine had to die and for the sad ending.
Anyway its an awesome story thanks for making this even though I really hoped a happy ending one.
LexisDancer chapter 15 . 1/22/2014
I do think your story was good and your writing was great theres just one thing that bothers me. I hate when people kill off a character without me expecting it. Its good that your writing isn't predictable, but here I was thinking I was gonna read a nice story about what the summary said but I got something else. I felt like reading a happy story with a happy eating but i got the complete opposite. Im just saying if you were going to do this plot twist you don't have to give away much, you could have warned a bit maybe put 'character death' or put the genre 'tragedy'. Overall good story just wasn't the thing I wanted to read. No hate intended just saying.
SerenadePanda chapter 15 . 1/18/2013
Waaaaa! Author-san! You've made me cried! *sobs
Beautiful story...
But you made me crying non-stop...
Huwaaa! T_T Namine died...
Pili1995 chapter 15 . 12/28/2012
God... You made me cry T_T... Poor Roxas and poor Namine.
You could do a meeting in the heaven jajajaja :P Like TITANIC or something. God, I almost cry when Kairi and Sora said goodbye to Namine, but, what made me cry was Roxas... God, he told her all his life and then "I love you" to a sleeping body :( It was like "OMG D':!"
Very good job, not many fics make me cry u.u
Take care!
candybear24 chapter 15 . 10/17/2012
NAMINE!... don't die... please i'll wait on your deathbed if i have too but just don't go :,(
candybear24 chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
archerrylime chapter 15 . 4/19/2012
Maybe this is kinda late to review this, but I just finished reading the story now. (although I alerted it a while ago)

The writing is not perfect, I'm not a professional but a few things I wished was different. But this story is so sweet, so romantic, that I cried in the ending! I've never cried reading a fanfic before. This is my first time ever.

I just want to tell you that this is such a beautiful story, and, (of course) I really enjoyed reading this!

Keep writing!
cry baby chapter 15 . 1/30/2012
omfg this made me cry like a baby this is the first sad fanfiction i have read and i loved it my tears were clouding up my vishon so it was hard to read at times but it was wonderful so please keep on writeing

love cry baby
Squidiot chapter 15 . 7/25/2011
i was so sad when she died TT

this was an amazing story and i loved every chapter!

a sad ending but i love them! definately going in my favs
Squidiot chapter 2 . 7/25/2011
Go innocence power!

Roxas is so self absorbed in this stor but i still love it so far!
Squidiot chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
When roxas said 'sorry i got lost in my eyes' i litterally fell out of my chair i was practically dieing

awesome job with the egochistical (sorry if i spelt that wrong) roxas!
hinata3487 chapter 15 . 7/24/2011
thats really messed up i mean really i want them to be happy i want them to be together forever, i really loved this but i cant help but cry i feel like a baby right now cuz of it I just keep crying like a little kid right now its so stupid but i cant stop crying why did you have to make it so sad i just cant stop crying TTTT i feel so bad for roxas
lilkaydawg chapter 15 . 5/22/2011
That was so freaking amazing.

This is my first time reading a fic with a sad ending...and you truly made my first time a story I will never forget. Seriously, I literally cried at the end. My dog was sleeping soundly on my bed, and when I released a high pitched cry he was like "wtf...get a grip you pathetic loser" so yeah...

Anyway, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.
HitsuMatsu831 chapter 15 . 5/1/2011
first of all...i want to say is "IHATEYOU"

well this is my first time i read a fic that namine died..well everytime the author's said "character death warning" or whatever i really didn't read it..reading it makes my already broken heart totally broken...and you made it amazingly beautiful(burst into crying)...

and i actually like no,scratch that i mean love it, the way you end it with those simple-heart crushing words...but reeeeeeeeeeeeaaly i want it to be happpyyyyyyyyy...

you have done a good job and this is my longest review btw(lol)

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