Does the dialogue get uh better? It's feeling pretty boneless ngl.I'll show you my Wolf Fang Fistbring it onWolf Fang FistIt's like AI acting out Dragonball.

A hero with enough writing capacity should continue this great story and leave the SPAM notice here. PLEASE٫ Honestamente siempre me agrado mas Erasa que Videl٫ Although she is definitely better than her father as a moral person. She always kept her arrogant side y temperamental. In addition, she never reveal what a fraud her father was.

Gohan/Bardock x Erasa :D

The truth is that I would have expected a better developed Kakaroto and Bulma meeting or that they had a "wild" encounter in the bedroom. (R18)

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Why doesn't kakarot tell bulma about the weaker gravity?

Are you going to continue this? You left us with a pretty big cliffhanger...

Its a shame itsbeen so long since this was updated, I would have loved to see where it went from here.

What a very bland story. I'm sorry for the people who find this good. They haven't seen a good work.

Unoriginal. I think you don't understand what a fanfiction is. It's basically a copy-paste summary you are doing.

True Saiyans fight alone. With their zenkai, I think Kakarot has the right mindset.

The dialogue is extremely bland. It sounds stupid as hell also

I would have love to know what happened next! What about Erasa?
What Bulma will discover and if she could save them?

Well imagining I guess she find a way to reverse the programming. But I wonder what about all them being androids? It would be like 18? They could live their life either way?
Also Vegeta will have a boy? It would be good if he have one and maybe Bulma and Kakarot have a girl?

Also Bardock will stay with Erasa and Videl? Or Erasa will die?

Bulma walking and all didn’t get 1 up?

Power levels are bullshit

Sometimes people who already read this story forgot that this is only fanfiction and AU. Author has a right to change or altered the original personalities and pairings of the characters involved. Besides, if Bardock and Erasa are in a relationship, it is normal to have SEX. Who is in romantic relationships don't do that? Hypocrites the lots of you. Bardock is NOT Gohan. PERIOD! And Erasa is not worthless! Just because she's not a fighter doesn't mean she's one. People also falls for sweetness and cuteness and sexy bod. Sometimes they do need normality in life and not all fighting.

Please. I love the pairing Bardock/Erasa. Don't let them break up. Make them like krillin and android 18.