What a very bland story. I'm sorry for the people who find this good. They haven't seen a good work.

Unoriginal. I think you don't understand what a fanfiction is. It's basically a copy-paste summary you are doing.

True Saiyans fight alone. With their zenkai, I think Kakarot has the right mindset.

The dialogue is extremely bland. It sounds stupid as hell also

I would have love to know what happened next! What about Erasa?
What Bulma will discover and if she could save them?

Well imagining I guess she find a way to reverse the programming. But I wonder what about all them being androids? It would be like 18? They could live their life either way?
Also Vegeta will have a boy? It would be good if he have one and maybe Bulma and Kakarot have a girl?

Also Bardock will stay with Erasa and Videl? Or Erasa will die?

Bulma walking and all didn’t get 1 up?

Power levels are bullshit

Sometimes people who already read this story forgot that this is only fanfiction and AU. Author has a right to change or altered the original personalities and pairings of the characters involved. Besides, if Bardock and Erasa are in a relationship, it is normal to have SEX. Who is in romantic relationships don't do that? Hypocrites the lots of you. Bardock is NOT Gohan. PERIOD! And Erasa is not worthless! Just because she's not a fighter doesn't mean she's one. People also falls for sweetness and cuteness and sexy bod. Sometimes they do need normality in life and not all fighting.

Please. I love the pairing Bardock/Erasa. Don't let them break up. Make them like krillin and android 18.

Vegeta:
7,000 (injured)
95,000 (healed)
This was way out of left field. No way in hell can he just 13xtimes his power level without actually training, no matter the sayian boost.

Fuck Satan

This is awsome i hope it didnt end or the author died. That would suck on so many levels.

plleeeeaasssseeee update this story!

You’re telling me vegeta’s zenkai gave him a x5 power level? Where did that number come from? What the fuck

ITS OVER 9000!