Darn it, Sixteen was so close to winning the fight. It's sad that he's gone now and is part of that evil bastard Thirteen. Ultra Thirteen is incredibly strong right now, but he's still no match for the Saiyans at this particular point in time.

Videl's easily going to get that sacred water now.

Videl's going to have trouble catching up to Korin, with her energy depleted and all. Sixteen seems to have the edge over the other three Androids, but there's no way he can beat them if they fuse together.

This is getting very, very interesting. Videl's definitely a lot stronger than her father now and I venture, she's going to beat him soon enough. Funny, how Gohan was eyeing Videl's legs xD (gotta admit, her legs are pretty damn awesome in DBZ, so I can't really blame Gohan haha). But poor Erasa. She's going to be reprogrammed into a cyborg or something. That's messed up!

Whoa what a twisted plan!

Poor Erasa. She's such a nice and innocent girl. Definitely doesn't deserve to be involved in any of that crap. I hope Bardock gets them good. The training with Videl was really cool! This gal's catching on really well.

Videl performed surprisingly well. It's nice that she's stronger and that she has a sense of rapport with Gohan. I liked Erasa with Gohan too, but that's more like summer love, whereas with Videl it's meant to last. It's a nice path to take. Anyway, looking forward to seeing the Don's plans.

Wow, so Crane and Hercule conspiring together, huh? That's a new low, but I can see it getting interesting, especially if he has to face off against his own daughter.

I forgot to mention Paragus in the previous reviews. It was so laughable how he claimed that his enemies brainwashed Broly xD. WOW! That's rich, coming from the guy who turned him into a docile drone, with that headband of his... -.-

I'm not too eager about Dr. Wheelo though, cause I never particularly liked him as a villain.

I really liked Vegeta's training with Celia xD (playing with barbies at 350 times gravity haha). I also loved Videl's training. It's great that she's getting stronger and stronger. Gohan will definitely appreciate her more and not look his nose down on her, like he did before.

I'm looking forward to Videl getting stronger. Maybe Gohan will find her more attractive when that happens xD.

I really enjoyed Videl's in-depth analysis of the Cell games. Hopefully she learns her mistake and apologizes to Bardock.

I feel really sorry for Videl. She genuinely believes Hercule's b.s. Honestly, that's just the biggest disservice a father could do (I understand that it's a difficult decision, since she's his daughter, but it's his own fault for creating the lie in the first place). Besides that, Videl's probably got a lot of potential as a fighter and it shouldn't go to waste. Heck, even Hercule's got loads of potential, if he weren't such a thickheaded dumbass.

I like Gohan/Erasa. They make a nice pair. And good to see Sharpener getting his ass beat. He totally had that coming.

Hercule's pretty darn strong ATM, it seems. I like how you explore him in more depth and explain the reasoning behind his decisions. Of course, one way or another he will be exposed. He opened a can of worms when he took credit for Cell's defeat.

I'm kind of hoping Vegeta gets a moment (so far, he's only killed Cui in the whole story and that's it - though he was owning Perfect Cell before giving in to temptation, so yeah).

I like how you portrayed Bardock and Videl here, not to mention Erasa. It leaves a lot of room for some nice development in the future.

Raditz beating Broly? Likely story xD. But then, the dude's clearly not at his fullest, so it makes some sense.