Reviews for After
Ravengal101 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Extremely well-written. This deserves more reviews.
Silentz chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
This was quietly beautiful. I loved the implicit relationship between Hei and Yin.
reaper with no name chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
This was very well written. It touched on just about all of the major and secondary characters and had the perfect balance of clarity and subtlety to get the message across.
sorakun9 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
This story was really good! I can't believe you really wrote 105 stories! You must be really creative. I love the Hei/Yin scenes.
Annie Sparklecakes chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
I loved that last line. Like, a lot. The whole story flowed in a really pretty, epilogue-y way, and I LOVED Yin.

This part was beautiful:

She stares at the engraved names, the fragility of humans written in stone. All that’s left, after all the tears and laughter is gone is a small note trying to verify an existence. A sign that someone lived and didn’t want to be forgotten.

Fantastic job.
Shubhs chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Try sending this to the dudes who make Darker Than Black and see if they'll use it in the 2nd season that's under production(insert *SQUE~AL!*)...I seriously think it is JUST that good!XP XD XD XD XP XD XD XD XD XD