Reviews for Harry Potter and the Veil of Time
Midoriryu chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
First off, I'm relieved. When Harry kept going on about how Dumbledore used Legilemency, I thought you were going to be writing an evil Dumbledore. While I can't rule that out as yet, what little I've seen so far you've written in a way I can accept.

Harry REALLY needs something to happen so that he can calm down. A ticking time bomb he is right now.
nightwing27 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
poor harry losing ginny cowards taking someone's love away from them just because harry took their whore away
Lord Kolos chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
Good going, I guess?
harryginny9 chapter 3 . 1/10/2012
thanks...love it...please update sooooooooon...
nya mayaha nya chapter 3 . 10/25/2011
update soon please!
pentium415 chapter 3 . 6/16/2011
I like what you have so far and I really hope that you decide to continue this story.
darkplayer35 chapter 3 . 6/9/2011
Interesting story. It has a ton of potential. Please update soon.
Demoneyes87 chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
hey very nice story... one of the few where harry actually is serious about the fight if you know what i mean... its sad though that it looks like you've abandoned the story... hope you might continue it... otherwise nice job...
george17 chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Excellent story. Too bad it looks as if you may have abandoned it. It is refreshing to see Harry act the way you would expect him to. It is amazing to me that I saw a review complaining that what Harry did was assault and battery. Well, yes it was and it was similar to actions taking my Draco and other students or teachers over the years. They didn't get punished and for here Harry did not either. What was the point of that reviewer's complaint?
gaul1 chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
interesting story, byes
Walking with Kings chapter 3 . 4/11/2010
You should totally update this. :3
sokar chapter 3 . 3/18/2010
hi, i just wanted to tell you that i like your story and that i was wondering when you would charge/upload the next chapter,

its kinda long so 5 months between chapter 3 - ?

i understand that you want to edit your chapters but when you poste them, we can write reviews and that gives you a outside opinion or find errors that you didn't find,

5 months, thats a long time ...
ILikeComps chapter 3 . 2/11/2010
Good story concept. Thanks for sharing!
crazyjim87 chapter 3 . 12/28/2009
when can we expect an update to the story?
Anon chapter 3 . 12/11/2009
An interesting story. I'm a little startled that Harry is attracted to Ginny, given that he's just traveled back in time at least three years. I guess a 17 year old being in love with a thirteen year old isn't really _that_ paedophillic, but it's still pretty squicky.
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