Reviews for On a Roller Coaster With You
Jellicle Jacquie chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
How cute!
Slightly Dead chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I like. Very much! Especially how Ami was the one to do something first. And, for some reason, Makoto's quick save. Maybe it's because I can't do any of my own. -.-

But really, this is good stuff. Keep writing!
TirOrah chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Aww, that was sweet! You captured both characters perfectly, and lmao, the ending made me grin just like Mako-chan did.
lactvoodle chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Awww ami makes the first move. Good story.
StormBrisingr chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Peace Faith chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I love shy Ami. So cute and so lovable.

Great story. Short, simple, adorable, but gets the job done.
Rukangel chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
LOl now that was unexpected but i liked it D
arrow-of-jane chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Ha ha that was cute. Didn't expect the ending.

I enjoyed it a lot.
Hobbes the Cat chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Good stuff. Very cute. I liked it a lot!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Well, well, soldier...


Cute. SO cute! LOL

Nice work!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Sakuragurl101 chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
ok I'm not usually a person who likes girl/girl but I have 2 admit that was 2 cute
KM Rune chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
LOL That was cute!
Renkhal chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Aw! That's so cute!