Reviews for On a Roller Coaster With You |
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![]() ![]() How cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like. Very much! Especially how Ami was the one to do something first. And, for some reason, Makoto's quick save. Maybe it's because I can't do any of my own. -.- But really, this is good stuff. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that was sweet! You captured both characters perfectly, and lmao, the ending made me grin just like Mako-chan did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww ami makes the first move. Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love shy Ami. So cute and so lovable. Great story. Short, simple, adorable, but gets the job done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOl now that was unexpected but i liked it D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha that was cute. Didn't expect the ending. I enjoyed it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff. Very cute. I liked it a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, well, soldier... This...was...A-D-O-Rable! Cute. SO cute! LOL Nice work! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok I'm not usually a person who likes girl/girl but I have 2 admit that was 2 cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL That was cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! That's so cute! |