|Reviews for One of the seven sins|
| BeautifulNights chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
haha, cute :) I like the plot! Simple but fun ;)
Keep writing in english too, you're doing great! I know how u feel being nervous about the language - i'm norwegian myself :) Good luck!
| QueenGryffindor chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Haha! This was really funny. I love how Sirius reacted when they were just starign at each other. XD
| DobbyLivesAgain chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
lol great job! very funny xD
| mage-luna chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Good ol' Sluggy and his pet students. D
| HerGoldenWings chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
:) Loved the little side bit about the lake.
| Jed52 chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
oh interesting! The ending was hilarious!
Just be a little careful with the spacing :)