|Reviews for Number Theory|
| I just like comedy chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
This story is very sincere but the character talking switches are VERY confusing. Is Isaac the Professer? Or is he the student? I really think you need to go back and edit this thoroughly. Read it aloud to someone and see what they say, or just read it yourself and see if you can follow it. I don't mean to be rude, but by the end of this story I ignored you're characters' names and just read the dialogue. It was too confusing to try and figure out who was speaking.
Overall, I think that this story could use some work, but you've got a good story plot going so far. I think you should continue it.
| AccountIsDeactivated111 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Hi, that was good! :)