Reviews for Top of the Food Chain
Tropp chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Amuzing and the story is good, it could however do with some editing. Some editing and a couple of extra lines here and there would turn it into a really, really good story - it's a little confusing at times as it is now. /Tropp
pink chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
WHAT DO YOU GET WEN YOU GO HOME?
Ellmarr chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
LMAO!
prudiisten chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
really why no sequal
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
I like it! **
c-wolf chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
this, is one of the few fics that reads like a pretender episode.
Katescats chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Hi just read your story it was very good.
erik chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Spoilsport! This was great.
B. Oots chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I just found the story. I hope you write more Pretender crossovers.
FireWolfw chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Why not it needs one.
trecebo chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
That was delightful enough without the threat of NO SEQUEL! Bummer, but understandable.

And now? I have Oz and Jarod on the brain. I think that's a good thing.
CelineSSauve chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
The marine smirked. “What are you? The monster police?” He chuckled. “The MP for the supernatural?”

“She’s prettier.”

-Priceless :D

Also, I loved the admiration of the NCIS tech for Jarod's handy work.

Keep up the great work!
Eliza Hayes chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Good story. Love NCIS and Oz from Buffy in the story.

By the way, this story is made for a sequel.
dreameralways chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Thank you. I love Pretender. There are not enough of these stories out there.
Saffygirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Lol, awesome story!
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