|Reviews for Top of the Food Chain|
| Tropp chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Amuzing and the story is good, it could however do with some editing. Some editing and a couple of extra lines here and there would turn it into a really, really good story - it's a little confusing at times as it is now. /Tropp
| pink chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
WHAT DO YOU GET WEN YOU GO HOME?
| Ellmarr chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
| prudiisten chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
really why no sequal
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
I like it! **
| c-wolf chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
this, is one of the few fics that reads like a pretender episode.
| Katescats chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Hi just read your story it was very good.
| erik chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Spoilsport! This was great.
| B. Oots chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I just found the story. I hope you write more Pretender crossovers.
| FireWolfw chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Why not it needs one.
| trecebo chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
That was delightful enough without the threat of NO SEQUEL! Bummer, but understandable.
And now? I have Oz and Jarod on the brain. I think that's a good thing.
| CelineSSauve chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
The marine smirked. “What are you? The monster police?” He chuckled. “The MP for the supernatural?”
Also, I loved the admiration of the NCIS tech for Jarod's handy work.
Keep up the great work!
| Eliza Hayes chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Good story. Love NCIS and Oz from Buffy in the story.
By the way, this story is made for a sequel.
| dreameralways chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Thank you. I love Pretender. There are not enough of these stories out there.
| Saffygirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Lol, awesome story!