Reviews for Criminal Act
Jenmoon1 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I liked it was nessie a virgin
Twilightlover1234567890 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
That was cute, and romantic.
Kayla chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
wow that was soo good lol u should write more stories i would enjoy them alot1
Thirst4light chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Great job considering this is your first fic!
inactive923 chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
"My universe was on fire"

Perfect ending and epic story. :)
BRROASTSTER chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
so the ending is so cute and it was a great one
FadingEmotion chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
i loved it.
TeamJakeBella chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
*clapping* great story love this pairing keep going
annatwo chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
I'm really impressed-can't believe thats your first fanfic. You really effectively expressed love and desire making it sound erotic and not just smutty.