Reviews for Bet on Love
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11
This was overall an okay read. You could improve your grammar because it sort of gets in the way of the story. And as for the plot, it moved really slowly. I reached Chapter 11 and till then what had happened? Alice decided she needed to teach Edward a lesson, Bella got new clothes and finally got a ride in Edward's car. Loads of unnecessary talking which really slows down the story. Bella isn't even a very attractive character. Also, Edward's description of Bella's translucent skin being 'sickly' is just a plain insult. Having her put on make-up doesn't make up for that. No matter what happens, she'll have to remove her make up sometime.
Motherof8 chapter 37 . 4/4/2014
Chapter seems kind of an M rating?
Motherof8 chapter 42 . 4/4/2014
Can't really see what Bella loves about him... All his actions were deplorable.
Motherof8 chapter 32 . 4/3/2014
Glad she didn't kiss him, but wish she wouldn't date him
Motherof8 chapter 22 . 4/3/2014
Really, really despise this edward
Motherof8 chapter 12 . 4/3/2014
Hope Bella stays strong
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 4/3/2014
Can Edward really get any worse?
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 4/3/2014
You're right, Edward is despicable
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 4/3/2014
Can't believe Alice is shy
Motherof8 chapter 4 . 4/3/2014
Love Bella's
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
Hope she agrees
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Sounds interesting
taz chapter 43 . 5/1/2013
more chapters please
So true chapter 34 . 1/4/2013
I love that Edward and Bella kissed. But not about going with Tyler on a date... Please ask her to say she is feeling ill to him
Edward loves me chapter 30 . 1/4/2013
AMAZING!
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