Reviews for The Innocent Heart of Darkness
Coffeefilterart chapter 34 . 4/30
I enjoyed this very much. I love how you articulated the struggle between Bella's desire to be with Edward and her absolute fear of hurting him. The description of his change and awakening was excellent too. I love the idea of the four of them living as a family.
yayasimone chapter 11 . 6/24/2016
That was visceral; we could feel the fear and pain. Good writing.
yayasimone chapter 9 . 6/24/2016
This is such a refreshingly different take on our Edward and Bella.
divyvicki chapter 34 . 2/21/2016
I love that Alice and Jasper joined them in immortality so they could form a family.
divyvicki chapter 33 . 2/21/2016
Good job with this chapter.
divyvicki chapter 32 . 2/16/2016
What a great scene.
divyvicki chapter 31 . 2/16/2016
Loved how you incorporated the ballet studio scene from Twilight into this chapter.
divyvicki chapter 30 . 2/12/2016
Edward just can't do what he is told.
divyvicki chapter 29 . 2/12/2016
Hmmm, so are they all going to be changed?
divyvicki chapter 28 . 2/8/2016
I find reading detailed sex scenes very boring, so I skipped much of this chapter. Glad they were able to connect though.
divyvicki chapter 27 . 2/4/2016
A www, I was so afraid that she had drained him, but at least he got to see her before he died.
divyvicki chapter 26 . 1/30/2016
Very interesting development.
divyvicki chapter 25 . 1/24/2016
I like the fact that there is no antangonism between the wolves and the Cullen's in this. I hated the Jacob/Bella/Edward triangle.
divyvicki chapter 24 . 1/20/2016
Thanks for the reassurances that this will not have a NM type leaving.
divyvicki chapter 23 . 1/16/2016
I thought it might be Jacob. Good thing he was there.
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