|Reviews for He Watched and We Loved|
| KFlynn934 chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
This was beautifully written, it was definitely cool to see a different side of Esme.
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Whew! I finally finished this (had to stop in between to fix the kiddoes dinner! Talk about cockblocking...) As I told you in my earlier PM, it was HOT! Holy hell, girl! I have to say, I'm not normally a big Jacob fan, but being that he's really not Jacob-y in this (besides physically) and he was incredibly sexy (definitely had me going with the way he was talking to her), it was fine.
Ummm... That Esme's one lucky lady. The whole scenario was beyond panty-melting. Though I don't think I'd ever be able to actually do something like this in real life, it was definitely more than enjoyable reading about it. And after all, that's what fanfic is for, at least for me-the fantasy of imagining myself in their shoes. Or out, as the case may be!
From the beginning of this, you had me hooked. You write so descriptively, I felt like I was there with them at the club. I could hear the music and imagien Carlisle amidst the crowd, watching them. And then at the house I could picture Carlisle sitting in the dark corner, his eyes on them and his hand on his cock.
The only thing I could say I wished was different (well, besides that it would've been Edward instead of Jacob), is that I'd have loved to get Carlisle's POV of this. I can only imagine his thoughts as he watched his wife being fucked by another man. And, of course, I wouldn't have minded if he and Esme had had ultra hot sex after Jacob was finished with her (perhaps a sequel?). After all, he did tell her he coudn't wait to taste her. Yes, yes, I know, he watched Jacob do it, and was a part of the action in that way, but I bet he wished he'd had his mouth on her, too!
Can't wait to read more of your stories. If they're as entertaining as this one, I'm all for it!
| B Johnston chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Um... I'm going to take a shower... a long cold shower.
I like that the writing was eloquent and the the thoughts were naughty. It's hard sometimes to read stories that have porn talk all the way through- It's refreshing to read a well-written narrative but still be able to hear the characters say exactly what they're thinking...
Yummy, Good stuff! Two thumbs way up!
*swats your bottom, "Good Game!" walks away throwing a towel over my shoulder, "Off to the showers..." LOL!
| chele681 chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I completely loved this. The intensity and emotion and total sexiness of it. So very well done.
| Kenzersmom chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
hum interesting. perv pack was right this was hoooo HOT! thank! how about some more?
| Linzzer220 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
i have no words for how hot that was :D
| SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
i do believe that was the hottest fic i have ever read.
| LoryB chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I'm sure you're wondering why the hell am I reviewing this since its old for you lol! Ill explain but later!. I've never been one to read anything about Daddy C and Esme but I give this one a try and I thinks is really really good and I even liked your Jacob (and that doesn't happen). Its sexy and intriguing and who would have thought of a lil pervy Daddy C right? If this one was your first I bow to you cause its really good! ;)
| 84gemstone chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
WOW going for a very cold shower now
| dsccc chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Freaking hot! Great job choosing to go with Jacob. So many people forget he is hot too!
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
The Jacob/Esme with Carlisle as a voyeur was really hot.
| lambcullen chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I will be honest and say a fic with Jacob isn't something I usually go for but DAYUM! That was good hun!
Erm... and you owe me a pair of panties! JSYK!
Thanks for sending me the link, bb.
Good luck x
| addictedtotwilight79 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Great idea! I loved it. The sex with Jacob was smokin'.
| MeowVemulapalli chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
WOW, girl! I suck at reviewing...usually I don't review at all or I just say I like the story. So what can I say?
| coldplaywhore chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Totally excellent entry. Good luck in the contest.