Reviews for Holding the Sun
mrs.zoeblack chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
that was so cute but ended to soon! 3
EmmaDel chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This would have made the book sooo much better.
Zayide chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Perfect...Stephanie Meyer should have consulted with you before she wrote her book...I hope one day you decide to continue this one shot...sound like it woudl be a wonderful story...not just a one shot...thank you for sharing...
Lilly chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
omgitsmiranda chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Awe very cute! I loved it(:
hogwartshobbiton chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
aww :D yeynes! :D thankyou! xx
Denise Black chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I think it would have been amazing if New Moon actually went like that! This is really good!
queenofthecourt07 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
awhh, this was super de duper cute :D I love Jacob, he's so amazingg. thanks for writing this ;D
SecondSunrise chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
This is very cute. Kinda fluffy. I love fluffy. Fluffy is great. :)
Afflictionseclipsedbyglory chapter 1 . 9/23/2009

that's all I can say, THIS, this is how New Moon should've gone...:)
dazzledsaphires16 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
AW soo cute! im team edward but i love the little one-shots with jacob and bella!
GoddessTiera chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
So good. I agree that Bella should have been with Jake. I like her when she is with him. I would love to see the look on Eddie's face when he inevitably comes back begging for forgivness, expecting Bella to just be waiting for him even after he told her to get a new life.