|Reviews for Kiss|
| seasaltsails chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
lovely. both of them were perfect. i love it a lot and also i kind of hate(d) loliver. thankyouu, dear, for your moliver. (i really wish they'd have been cannon).
| CuttieGirll57 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
This was absolutely perfect! I wish it happened for real! I'm so tired of Loliver X( and I want Moliver to happen in the end. Awesome story!
| Made of Ossum chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Aww, Theresa, that was so cute! DEFINITELY the way Uptight, Oliver's Alright should have gone! :D You really should be like a scriptwriter or director one day. Show these Disney execs how it's DONE. xD
M I didn't really like all the changes they made to the end of that episode though... I mean, yes, they explained diabetes better, and the no Loliver suffocation was good, but I missed Miley sticking her head in the cotton candy and the MxO dancing and her tugging on his hoodie and that little hug at the end of the original No Sugar Sugar episode. Plus Traci hitting on Oliver was hilarious. I don't know why they took that out. xD
Your version pwns both of those anyhow, though. :) Like OH MY GOSH-the sucking on Oliver's finger? LMFAO. That was just-WOW. So-inappropriate yet completely fitting to the storyline and downright amazing at the same time. XD I LOVED IT. XD
And of course, the kiss was adorable! And really forceful, with the whole chair-tipping thing. xD But of course that just makes it hotter, lmao. "Not that I didn't enjoy that" hahaha. xD Of course you enjoyed it, Oliver. ;D
Aww the ending was a tiny bit disappointing though. But that also made it seem more realistic, like it could actually happen on the show that way...idk.
Anyways, loved it! NEVER STOP WRITING! haha not that I think you ever would...random...okay I should stop now. xD
| flareorfury chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Beautiful as alway T_Jx
I like it!
No LOVE IT!
| OopsyDasey chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
AH how could you end it like that? haha! Veryy good still though! )
| Courvoisier chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
| Riana Salvatore chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Too bad nothing resulted. I've added some new chapters to One of the Girls since your last review. Maybe you should check them out and review.
| xxHeadInTheStarsxx chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Aw, that was cute and sad all at once. I liked the part where Miley licked the chocolate off of Oliver's finger. haha. That made me smile :)
| TWLOHA Girl 4 Life chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
YOUR DAMN RIGHT THIS SCENE WAS MISSING FROM THAT EPISODE.
Grr. I hate Hannah Montana writers.
You need to replace them. Like now.
Seriously. You're an amazing writer. And this was fantastic.
I loved it. It was so cute and adorable! I really can see that happening.
Amazing job as always!
| SVUlover is too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
GRREAT STORY! LOVE IT! toobad it didn't realy happen:(