Reviews for A Night Out
bloodyhunter chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
It drew me in but I really wish that you had a beta reader because while I sorta get what your trying to say/type it really hard for me to grasp what your writing. I like the story but you really need a beta reader. I'm sorry if I sounded mean I just wanted to tell you what I thought...
bloodyhunter chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Is there any where that I can read this story? The summary peaked my interest...
Kyer chapter 3 . 9/30/2009
Lots of grammar/spelling errors.

How about a wolf bat? A literal wolf with bat wings and retractable claws. He would transform during a quarter moon...both waxing and waning just to make it different and more often.
uncannyinstigator chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
Sweet. I am curious what attacked him. Could it be a werewolf?

A lot of spelling and grammer errors, but it will be interesting to see where this goes.
Kyubi-female chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
I got the Internet, see:

Dog Demon


or xaotl./art/Firebringer-SeshomaruFIN-49077258

Dog demon with wings


Cat demon


or merinid-de./art/Nanaki-61483715

Cat demon with wings




or discipleofthegryphon./art/Towards-the-darkness-by-Elfant-53619460



You like it?

PS: Please don't abondone your history, I'm loving...

(I used google)
Kyubi-female chapter 2 . 9/25/2009
hum... Please update soon!

I was curious this story...

Please, please continue!