|Reviews for A Night Out|
| bloodyhunter chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
It drew me in but I really wish that you had a beta reader because while I sorta get what your trying to say/type it really hard for me to grasp what your writing. I like the story but you really need a beta reader. I'm sorry if I sounded mean I just wanted to tell you what I thought...
| bloodyhunter chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Is there any where that I can read this story? The summary peaked my interest...
| Kyer chapter 3 . 9/30/2009
Lots of grammar/spelling errors.
How about a wolf bat? A literal wolf with bat wings and retractable claws. He would transform during a quarter moon...both waxing and waning just to make it different and more often.
| uncannyinstigator chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
Sweet. I am curious what attacked him. Could it be a werewolf?
A lot of spelling and grammer errors, but it will be interesting to see where this goes.
| Kyubi-female chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
I got the Internet, see:
Dog demon with wings
Cat demon with wings
You like it?
PS: Please don't abondone your history, I'm loving...
(I used google)
| Kyubi-female chapter 2 . 9/25/2009
hum... Please update soon!
I was curious this story...
Please, please continue!