|Reviews for Persona 4: The Genesis|
| Mayumi-H chapter 2 . 10/20/2009
This is pretty good - interesting to see Nanako able to wield her own Persona.
Make sure that you punctuate within your dialogue, though. For example:
"Pleasure to meet you," said Margaret.
This will help keep the reader focused on the story and plot itself, rather than being taken out of the action by the grammar rules.
I'd also like to see some more description and character motivation, especially from Nanako, but that's just a personal choice of mine.
| Reever Rayne chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
This fic intrigues me...cant wait for the update
| Hikaru Yamamoto chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Wow,Unexpected Nanako's the next wild card. Usually everyone makes her older but ...just update soon!