Reviews for Belly Dancing one shot bella edard lemon
MyLifeIsEdwardCullen chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
AH! LOVE IT! Plz would u read my story: Look pastthe veil of hate? Please review aswell! X
freshprincess chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
love it, please make a 3-shot :D
RandomFly chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Um, storyline wasn't terrible but certainly not enjoyable. Learn some grammar before you try to write a story. And the dialogue's pretty awful.
aquamysticwriter chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
nice