Reviews for What If? Naruto
shedges19 chapter 8 . 8/20
Are you going to be doing any more of this story it's getting good
snorlax285 chapter 9 . 7/18
Such an awesome story. I wish you would've continued but thanks for the read.
sgriffin730 chapter 9 . 5/25
this is very interesting most of thus nature is overly done but not this. well done
Lycansenpai chapter 1 . 2/25
this irds a great fanfic wish you would continue it
jleeluv14 chapter 9 . 2/15
great story can't wait for the next update!
Kyrie Akat chapter 5 . 12/27/2017
I'll correct you, he lost a horn to Kumo not Kyuubi
Kyrie Akat chapter 2 . 12/26/2017
"Now I want you to kick this log 100 times with your arm" Kick using your arm?
NiceHistoryBTW chapter 9 . 8/25/2017
i am concerced, why are you making this so fuckin' forced? and why are you attempting to do a harem over here? normally, i like history's which are Naru/Tema (My fav pair just above the Naru/Ino) but i do really hate the history's with harem's while saying this yeah i mean it! i hate around the 50% of the history's that are posted in this page, on those 50% of historys are the Naru/Hina - Harem's - Yaoi's so... you have an idea, backing on the topic on the hand, i liked the history, but whatever the outcoming of this result in harem, i would be really pissed off for losting my life (Even if this history wasn't updated in 7 years... even so, i would be really pissed off.) but netherless to say that this is a good fic.
SinfulPride chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
The only things I'm not hugely fond of is how broken the shadow clones are here. I feel like 180 clones dispersing several books worth of knowledge in a single moment should do a lot more than just make you lose your balance. I feel like it would knock you on your ass for a day or two just from the information overload. If the time-frame was stretched out a bit, it would be way more believable. Like a book a day or something. The other thing is Kyubi knowing jutsu. Not implausible, but I find the Bijuu knowing handseals and such silly as they are beings of massive power and pure chakra which wouldn't need handseals or jutsu. Just my opinion
Guest chapter 4 . 4/22/2017
Dust lava crystal wood release and rinniegan
Kamhal chapter 9 . 3/2/2017
Will there be any update on this?
Guest chapter 9 . 2/24/2017
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2017
Lol, it's meditation not mediation
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
Ugh, you've got terrible style for a story. I'm gone.
ranto rantau chapter 4 . 1/16/2017
stupid fic
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