|Reviews for Minutes to Mercury|
| Cara2012 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Beautiful story I love it!
| citigirl13 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
I was reading the reviews for this fic and realised - I never did one myself, despite the fact I have had this on my favourites list for a good few years now. This story is really beautiful. You use a very simple scene to describe a profound realisation in Vegeta. The writing style is beautiful, pulling the reader in. I love the interaction between B/V too. As much as I love the scenes of those two bickering, I also love seeing them when they get on. After all, there must have been quiet moments at SOME point in their relationship. But anyway, a very good job on this story and it is constantly one I read when life is stressing me out as it makes me feel very peaceful. Good job!
| Kara Alen chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Perfectly gentle, romantic... you got me! *SOB*
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
| threeam inkblot chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
awesome fluffy interactions
| lonni chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This was simply great. Beautifully written, in-character, amazing prose. There's nothing else to say, really.
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
"Lemme think about it." The moment she said that I knew what she was going to do. Anyways, aside from that this was awesome. Especially how it kept coming back to Mercury (Just wondering, why that planet out of all of them.) Overall, awesome job. The line I liked the best was:
"He wonders when it was he stopped planning on running away. He wonders when he stopped wanting to run."
| XDarkAngelOfLoveX chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Very beautiful! _
| Joe B chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
| Piccolo is green chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
I absolutely adore this one shot. It's heartfelt and honest, gets to the point, and both Vegeta and Bulma are completely in character. The night after Buu is tackled often enough, but I've never seen a scene quite like this, and I have to say I think this fic is the best of all. I only wish I had discovered this one shot earlier!
| jadedsiren chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
i love this shot. and what i does for them. a really well done moment for 'em. i love chapters and one shots that focuses on or highlights bulma and vegeta directly after Buu. That opens up the next chapter between them, a chapter that is essteally their happyly ever after. it felt like bulma and vegeta and was romantic yet still subtle. nice.
| Blahblahblah chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Awe cuute! loved it! I loved when she jumped off the roof, knowing that vegeta would catch her. Great work!
| staceynes chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Thank you for writing this! I've read through other one shots and this is by far worth the read! You definitely kept Vegeta in character. Which makes the read much more enjoyable as opposed to other stories that made him a bit too soft for comfort. Totally made my supposed study time worth while.
| FerociousWink chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
This is so achingly beautiful i had to write a review.
your writing is gorgeous and im so glad i got to read it . ..everything about the mood and the dialogue GOT to me :)
| ShelbyDesu chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
this was SO GOOD! i loves you. marry me? just kidding. xD.
seriously though, this was awesome. thanks for writing it. 3