Reviews for A Letter to My Husband
Wardrob07 chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
This is heart shattering. I hope as fu*k he is telling the truth and this was all one big set up or misunderstanding. Both have flaws though. I wish he stayed and talked little more with her, but I guess it is not his forte, he should probably calm down first...
Wardrob07 chapter 8 . 1/22/2013
Will he stop tormenting her? This is so not fair, and she should ask him some questions already! I understand she is under his influence and over emotional, but I hope she sobers up soon.
Btw, what would hopefully be a lemon, looked very hot and promising ;)
Wardrob07 chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
His rage is unbelievable, but considering his character and how she described him maybe it's not. And why he keeps bringing Jacob Black up? To ease his own conscience? I hope he won't be too violent with her, but this is so wonderfully written, that I'll keep reading nevertheless...
Wardrob07 chapter 6 . 1/22/2013
"the intimidating man standing in the other room was still my husband, not my mortal enemy."- she just has to remember this line, and everything will be ok I think. Still she needs answers and soon. He is so frustrating, geez, but hot as hell :D
Oh, and she is wearing stockings...sounds like a promising evening LOL
Wardrob07 chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
I hope this last sentence was said with sarcasm. I king of understand she has no power over her own body and mind near Edward, his bare presence must be overwhelming. And did he stalk her all this time? This Edward is really something...
Wardrob07 chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
Wtf? Jake in the middle of Stockholm? LOL
I can't imagine going for a ride with a person I just met, but then again, book Bella did the very same thing so it's ok (I guess).
Wardrob07 chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
Her love is so tangible and your words are magical *sigh*
Angela is great friend, she is so right, at 30 Bella should know better than to underestimate herself like that. But who knows under what kind of mental of physical "abuse" she was with Edward, or at all...we still don't know what really happened between them, what was he like etc. I hope we find out soon, I hope he shows up soon...
Wardrob07 chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
This story brings out such a strong emotions...
Wardrob07 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Just WOW! What a great, poetry like and intense chapter/story!
Saw a rec on fb, I'm def in...
dalma101 chapter 14 . 1/22/2013
They have returned to their usual interactions and I can see why their dynamic is perfect for them. It takes the omnipotent husband and no less valuable wife:) They can banter and flirt endlessly and she is a competent sparring partner (who wisely doesn't want to lose, but wants him to win more, lol). She lets him lead her, to satisfy his need to provide a framework, to validate himself as a man and in return she is allowed to embrace her more fragile femininity that seeks for warm protection. It's such a complex issue and I admire you for combining an archetypal and modern aspects of marriage in such mouthwatering way:) I wonder though is it the reason why there's no children in a story, so that the fokus could stay on this basic bond between woman and man? I'm finding myself thinking a lot about this beautiful story...
dalma101 chapter 13 . 1/22/2013
This chapter is! It's such a treat to be inside Edward's head. He is powerful and imposing person that intimidates people, so it's easy to resent him (except dazzled women, lol). But knowing his moral integrity and value system, his point of view about power (being strong in oder to be kind and considerate), about home with Bella (paradise regained), about bending her to his will (make her feel like dancing not walking on egg shells), and knowing his artistic, not scientific, approach to understanding his wife, I must be fascinated by him. Perfect Edward, indeed:)

I'm impressed by your filigree work when building drama with Tanya. So many vivid details, high suspense till the end. The clashing of strong personalities as biblical defeat of a phony snake. While reading this I was sitting on the edge of sofa:)
marleymarls chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I'm almost finished reading this story and I would just like to say how much I love it. The dynamic between Bella and Edward in this story is one of the most intriguing ones I've ever read.

On a purely superficial note, your Edward is the of the hottest, most domineering and sexiest Edwards I've read...I might be in love ;-)
trs1 chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
Holy moly that was off the radar hotness! This chapter was fully of lemony goodness that was so well written! I think it's one of the hottest chapters I have read in fanfic, and I have read many of them! It was nice to see that Edward played out one of Bella's fantasies while at the same time purging the anger that he felt over Jake in a very good way! The dialogue between these two during the chapter was so hot...I am like call the fire department on Edward and Bella! LOL

It was so nice to see a resolution of the conflict. You can see the characters come full circle from the pain and hurt to finally grasping how important they are to each other. All of that leads to a heartwarming HEA which left me with such a good feeling after reading your story!

Thanks for writing such a memorable, dominate Edward. I am so glad that I found your story and I am a big fan of your work. :)
trs1 chapter 14 . 1/21/2013
I would have been so pissed off at Edward for inviting his family over for a formal dinner after a 14 hour flight! You write unresolved sexual tension really well. The dominate Edward really adds to the sex appeal of your story.
trs1 chapter 13 . 1/21/2013
You've done a wonderful job with this story. I had a feeling that Tanya was the one behind the pictures but I didn't imagine that she was involved with Aro and the attempts to sabotage the business. Wonderful work portraying Tanya as obsessive, deranged, and delusional. I can't believe that she would think that an act like that constitutes any kind of love on her part.

I have to say that I enjoy your Edward tremendously. He's dominate, and kinda of an arse, but I like the way that you wrote his character as arrogant. Very sexy!
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