Reviews for A Letter to My Husband
NanaWillbur chapter 4 . 4/5/2016
I am hanging in here enjoying your story! Time will tell me what I want to know. You are a very talented writer and it shows!
Harrypotterwannabe00 chapter 7 . 3/4/2016
Make no mistake you are an awesome writer you can literally make the characters come to life and that's a very hard talent to find but bella is pathetic I'm sorry if this offends you but she is this is not an attack on you writing and your person just the character bella
Princess Mishawaka chapter 15 . 11/5/2015
Very good writing. You had my attention all the way. You are an author whether or not you write from memory or you write from your soul. I think you are much better than you think you are.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 14 . 11/5/2015
I think Edward is too manipulative. I couldn't put up with that. He was exactly the same when he was written by SM. I know she loves him and is attracted to him but his sarcastic mouth would never do for me.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 2 . 11/5/2015
Poor Bella she is really sick over this
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
I like it. Its different and that makes it so interesting.
Dgcyuvy chapter 13 . 8/29/2015
If you are still feeling dissatisfied because there will no longer be any more books, then I suggest you go to this website .com.
Twilight: the missing pieces ...
It all four books from Edward's point of view ...
The author's writing is very close to Stephenie Meyer's way of writing with much more details... She continued Stephenie's Midnight Sun... a bit beyond Breaking Dawn and she Edward's personal diaries ... Also, it's M rated soooooo... Yep you get to read about the honeymoon (wiggling eyebrows) ...
Dgcyuvy chapter 14 . 8/29/2015
I feel exactly like Bella feels... Every time I read the story my bones melt...
Dgcyuvy chapter 15 . 8/29/2015
I know wrote in your final disclaimer that the story is not original, but would consider continuing it ? I can beg if you want... Cause I'm in love with this story ... I want know and see more of Edward and Bella, your Edward and Bella in this story to be more specific. Are ever going to write other FF ? And if you're not going to continue with story (which is painful to consider), where do you see your Edward and Bella in the future? What kind of obstacles do imagine them overcoming? What major things would happen and new things in their life?
Sorry if I'm annoying you... I'm incredibly curious...
Your (obsessed with your story) faithful reader...
La revedere from Germany
Dgcyuvy chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
I've read your story and I have to say ...I'm surprised by the lack of reviews and the little the story got... There definitely should be more reviews ... I found the way you wrote the story quite captivating and I want to say that I understand Edward's character and the way he behaved, although, from what I read in others' reviews, that almost all of them were outraged maybe even alarmed by Edward's behavior towards his wife, but I totally understand you and what you were thinking about ...
I would like to ask some questions, if would answer them I would be grateful ...
What does Edward do for living, exactly? What is going on between him, or his business, and the Volturi's, specifically? Can you explain to me more about them, the characters, I mean, and their background? How long have they been married? Why don't they have children yet? And one thing I really really need to know is, does Edward always behave like this, or is it just for now? Giving the situation? Aaaaand one last thing... Do you have any intention of continuing the story, which would sooo cool and I would love you to death, or are planning on writing something new ?... Ohhhh please do...
That's it... Thank you so much for sharing this story...
Your faithful reader... :)
Ms.DramaQueen chapter 15 . 8/8/2015
I really dont know what to say to be honest. It's well written, but according to me laxks a bit of warmth and romance.
I mean i'd definitely leave husband this controlling and just arrogant.
But i know , the real life is very different from a fic life, and this somewhere is a real life type of story.
Good writing.
Stay blessed.
-Ms D.
EBLoveSong chapter 15 . 7/17/2015
Oh my gosh!
I absolutely loved this story! There aren't words. It's definitely in my top 10 faves of all times.
I gotta say though, reading the first chapter was hard. I was so absorbed by Bella's agonizing thoughts, I was positive that he was being unfaithful. It tore at my heart. I never ever read fanfics where Edward cheats. Neither of them, obviously. Oh poor Jacob! It didn't turn out well for him, I guess. I mean the way Edward handled him turned me right the fuck on. lol. But seriously, I feel bad for the guy. He thought he had a chance.
Ah... I don't know what it is with dominant, jealous, possessive Edward that gets to me so much. It's intoxicating and addictive, I can totally relate to Bella. I get it. Its infuriating, too. Ugh. For a moment there, I was sure Edward would never give in. Like he wasn't affected at all! I wanted to claw at him and BEG him to just do it! He made ME swoon, jeez! His reactions were so strange and at time scary (which was sexy in a very disturbing way, btw) , at the hotel that night and when she finds him in his office in the last chapter. I mean, I understand it yet it puzzles me. He said he wanted to claim her again and again, yet he kept restraining himself.
Anyways, I had been hoping we'd get a letter conversation/discussion between these two. It's the essence of the story after all, isn't it? "A letter to my husband." It's an important, meaningful symbol in your story. Yet they never bring it up afterwards. That was my only disappointment. I was really expecting Edward to say...something on the matter. To tell her what he thought of it or what he felt... if he felt something at all, lol. He's so stoic. On the outside at least. Also, I'm glad he casually mentions that he loves her over the phone, at least. Otherwise, I'd seriously wonder if what he feels for her is a selfish impulse to own her, devoid of emotion, or if said impulse and need roots from his love for her; the driving force of his desire to possess her.
Well, to be honest, I'm so utterly devastated that it's over. It was so short! And I see you haven't written anything else either. But I'll still keep tabs on you, just in case you come up with another amazing thing to share with us. ;)
Thank you so much, I really enjoy it. (Seriously, I'll find your story a place in my iBooks library *sheepish*)

Hope I hear from you again!

- Ally, xo.
Mona69 chapter 15 . 7/11/2015
I loved the build up but i guess the talking felt too much at times!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/30/2015
Your disclaimer states this story is not original, but the way you've compiled it is perfect. I don't remember ever reading anything so wonderfully erotic in my life.
terriberry chapter 15 . 6/7/2015
Oh the agonizing angst, the torturous slow slow burn, and the smoking hot fiery fruition. I thoroughly enjoyed the challenging characters and gorgeous words. Just wonderful.
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