Reviews for Saiyan Unleashed
tmntfanforever852 chapter 5 . 10/29
Love this story and you are right gt really didnt make any since like say how is it that vegeta was able to go super saiyan 4 without ever reaching level 3 he skip a level and i aint counting fusion or the earrings wonders why supreme kai gotten struck that way and why didnt goku and vegeta get struck when they used the earrings i think its funny they even onced did the fusion dance that was pure comedy that close and i beilived your version of chichi was spot on i can really see her doing that to gohan and i think the reason goten doesnt have a tail is becaused chichi may of taken a butcher knife and cut it off she is cruel enought to besides even on the saiyanman saga shouldnt she had have goten do training exercises or even train him before attacking him and calling him a monster was wrong of her might explained why trunks or goten never told anyone they could became super saiyan do to chichi may of gotten them to beilive they were wrong and were monsters and thought they be treated differently do to how chichi treated goten wonders if she ever stop to think if they didnt defend the earth and it was either blown up or enslave how was she going to send him off to school i still finding its hard to beilive shes was really a princess of the ox kingdom and i dont think the ox king is human thats not normal for humsns to be that tall am thinking he was part demon or part giant and also is so then what was chichi mother and would that mean that gohan and goten is half saiyan and half something elsed that not even human chichi mother could of been an alien for all she knew
pblondsey chapter 1 . 9/21
Damn it, you two! You just spoiled it! FFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCKKKK!
FrostHunter chapter 5 . 8/19
Cool like this story like that bardock met his grandson then his son and other grandson also I like that gohan obtained super saiyain four as well glad gohan got his tail back as well kept it cool on how good majin buu was spared as well gohan ended up with videl.
ZetaDragoon chapter 2 . 7/21
...You know Bulma, for some reason, I don't think letting your husband kill a seven-year-olds mother RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM and saying "It's fine. She was a bad person and deserved it. And don't worry, I'll adopt you!" Is the best thing to do.

Look. I get that you hate Chi-Chi and all, but did you really think Flanderizing her this much was a good idea? Not to mention what you did to Gohan's character. Honestly, these two are Gohan and Chi-Chi in name(and appearance) only.

Two chapters in and I can't bare to read another word. Not a single person in this fic comes off as likable, save for Videl. And even with her, she has like, one or two character traits. It feels like the rest of the cast exist solely to hammer in just how awful a person Chi-Chi is and that is not good writing.

The fact is if you are going to make a hate fic... don't. They never work and make you look immature by comparison.
Lance chapter 1 . 6/25
I love the story great job
GoHaNViDeLSoN chapter 5 . 6/11
Ooh, this fic was absolutely brilliant...
I dislike Chichi to hell, so a thumbs up for Chichi bashing...
Loved the cute Gohan/Videl moments...

Great fic. Overall,
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 1 . 4/19
I always loved gohan and it would be awesome if he become super saiyan blue or super saiyan god
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 1 . 4/19
Can u please continue this in dragon ball super also
fuzzy122672 chapter 1 . 3/3
This is just...
Fucking hell, no, why would this even work?
SSJ5MysticGohan chapter 5 . 1/27
This is literally the best fic I ever read I wish they made this the actual ending to DBZ you can't let this be over yet have you ever thought about making a sequel? Like something about pan being the first female Super Saiyan or about Gohan bardock Vegeta and Goku fighting Omega Shenron or if you don't like GT go into dragon Ball super and make Gohan the first Super Saiyan God there's so much potential keep the great story going
WOOHTHATSRIGHT chapter 5 . 1/26
blood enraged chapter 5 . 12/26/2016
years later and its still good

perhaps i can convince you to continue this story in the super arc's, see a super saiyan 4 god or some ridiculous thing like that take on beerus
Brian Awesome chapter 5 . 3/20/2016
I am suprised that Gohan didnt bring up Frieza's fault in the Saiyan Planet trade.. and what about Bringing Bardock AND his crew, King Vegega, Nappa, and Raditz to the upper world? and I imagine that Pan, Bulla, and Videl would eventually with Piccolo, tien, yamcha, krilllin, and the saiyans to train?!
Brian Awesome chapter 4 . 3/20/2016
Why would eighteen want to cover marron's eyes from the simple kissing?! And since Gohan achieved SSJ3 before going mystic... he would then be as strong as Baby Pre ape Vegeta... so he would have no need to go SSJ4 against Kid Buu.. who's weaker than super buu... just saiyan.
Brian Awesome chapter 3 . 3/20/2016
I hope Vegeta was a SSJ2 (and then using USSJ grade 2 while in that form) when fighting SUper Buu!
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