|Reviews for Vacationing with Vampires and Mermaids|
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/12
| Debbie Hicks chapter 21 . 5/15/2015
it happened it was a Sickness Curse onto myself I was sick very sick Carlisle he planted a curse I am going turn you into a Hybrid with ourselves then Bit me very Hardest then it happened Sudden it causing them bit me but It went very too Wrong then CRUNCH! Right onto my Wholliest body then suddenly Screamed very too loudest then Shrilling up a Storm but it happened to myself with themselves suddenly Crawling outside with my own corpse then it happened burned as much too hottest and gaining Enhanced my strength my longevity I was turning something else a Merpire Half-Mermaid and Half-Vampire a new species wre botn from them suddenly the bodies fell to the sea then it happened the risen of the breaking Dawn but it happened I was different from other Mermaids or Vampire I will be a link like Delenn from Babylon 5 the guards Crowned me Queen of both worlds the newspapers reported it happened Cracked myself free as a 21 year old Merpire Rose she is broken out with our guards I remained in a Vulcan healing trance then it happened clicked Blood Red eyes I was ravenous hungry it is Complete husband I am your wife Forever in death Forever more the Cullens knew who I was but it happened my love and I were free that I kicked as all of bodies drowned them for good but it happened my new Appearance was different then suddenly it came too late it roared but swirled but a sudden thrusting as all of them suddenly all of the all of the Prizes as all of tribazillions or mazillions erupted And suddenly the guards all of them much many more as all of them drained as all Blood as much much more as all of them then Bit as all of Dead Merpeople by reviving with my own corpse then could not stop then Breaking out as all members and all of the sudden Marcus married my corpse but it shattered with them but together the Prizes Exploding too late killed Didyme were merged but shattering but it caused the Curse to be a Gift of Song of Death then it's name was Scylla of the Volturi but it happened to me but I was so thin but more pale like a Vampire I need to go on a Milltary diet ugh Rose yes your eyes turned Golden they took the remains of my seed with his into a thing yes come your Daughter hatches my Queen and King then it happened dressed from John Carter it happened they posed wearing to Reneesme Carlie Cullen the first princess of the above ground as a link cheers you Allies we rejoice to the heir to the Helium throne of the planet Mars then it Snapped a wail was more louder then then it was done your daughter Sire as Jeddak you will learn to care for her with your Queen done well laid a egg me a Egg-laying woman of Mars yes you are a Martian then it happened she aged faster but suddenly reached her own 21st birthday stopped aging here we are the rulers Great way to honor our royal rule yes Reneesme had a problem who was part-Mermaid and Part-Vampire was link to the ground and sea who was imprinted by Jacob Black who courted her Mother Father I am dating oh my god Dating yup oh man you look amazing oh yeah shut your mouth kiss me they did oh man get a Room oh how sweet cut it out bud oh gross hey Jake Pack we have a problem it herself hey buddy what is it I Think she is into love with me Sam I am dating Your Majesties the princess is guarded by both that's great that a Kingdom started but it happened while cycling then it happened with the both best friends and hybrids with the three with imprints and kids then with the both suddenly crashed but smashed from the bodies vanished to their hall into death released more guards but it happened killed for dinner murdered but it came too late never made it to the living realm then it happened myself was infertile but my daughter laid a Egg from her chest like a Martian woman then snapped out Eight kids holy moses I am fine that it happened I was a young-looking grandma then he tested my daughter then it happened a biggest family kingdom in history Sir! they are breeders but had expanded their Empire Spit! that was it we forged a Kingdom above ground had prayed to god of the sea to keep our coven alive by cursing us and them I was a priestess-queen hear us God of the Seas and Earthquakes bliss us with more guards and soldiers and warriors Curse ye Volturi with a deadliest Disease that their Humans will be dead in seconds heed my prayers Curse them with a Snake of water with spit will Attack fear me Volturi I am Immortal beware Scylla your hair is Serpents you will be hideous like a Gorgon will be in hiding will birth monstrous children so terrifying you are Cursed while pregnant that the Gods of Mt Olympus blessed us but I cursed the mother to be as a hideous creature then in due time Scylla birthed him a hybrids all terrifying and horrible to look at Son of the gun she is a deity so my daughter we are like gods then it happened Scylla was a monstrous beast the First officer was very tall and Muscular but she was consorting with as all undead and living dead then the more she mated created her new race but it happened was sick in both merged bodies destroying herself then it happened granted herself a new body it came too late the Volturi were furious about as all of them suddenly the children were not human anymore but cursed with the Volturi were infertile had hideous children all of them were far way too late as all of them boy you sure teaching them a biggest lesson yes about then it happened they were terrified of her haunting them guided outside that they were freed but with ourselves now she ruled alone but it happened it causing her daughter to take the throne then herself died but was kelp it happened we been overthrown by her daughter took a mate of two men is ruling Italy our land oh no this is dreadful then it happened could not return here but resided in America.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/17/2013
How come she didn't turn into a mermaid in the shower?
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/17/2013
what happened to her mother?
| Slytherin-Princess95 chapter 22 . 9/16/2012
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 22 . 9/2/2012
I think the title could make it less obvious about what she is.
In the chapters nearer to the beginning, you had a lot of words that were spelled wrong.
Keep up the great work! :) (:
| Antara93 chapter 22 . 5/29/2012
awesome ff cant wait 2 read d sequel...
| Black and death Angel chapter 8 . 4/11/2012
And I love Anastasia
| Black and death angel chapter 8 . 4/11/2012
Journey to the Past is a Great Song for this CH and I can sing I ok but my once upon A december from Anastasia not Disney is great . I wish that my mom wound be ok for me to sing and put it on YouTube to see Why do they love or not love , like my sing .Well it ok *･ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･'(*ﾟﾟ*)'･*:.｡. .｡.:*･ﾟ･*
| Milady D' Hiver chapter 7 . 4/8/2012
Hey! Well the correct translation is
"Βοήθεια! Ο πόνος! Ας τον σταματήσει κάποιος! Σας παρακαλώ."
"Γιαγιά Αφροδίτη! Παππού Ποσειδώνα! Βοηθήστε με, διώξτε τον πόνο μακριά!"
if you need any other translations you know where to find me:))
i like the story. its just that... i dont really like edward. for the first time. anyway. i'll see :))
| ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 22 . 2/27/2012
omg i love it
| vampdreams chapter 22 . 2/21/2012
I have happened to read another bella mermaid, but hands down your's takes the cake and the icing too and the cherry on the top!
I love how you've woven Greek mythology into the whole plot!
It was- is- one hell of a job!
LOVE IT to bits!
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 21 . 2/14/2012
Another excellent chapter I love it.
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 20 . 2/14/2012
Another excellent chapter I love it.
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 19 . 2/14/2012
Another excellent chapter I love it.