Reviews for The Line
PurpleProseRose chapter 1 . 5/7/2011

too many "he hated"'s for this poem- lengthy...


is is a defined classic- the "opposites attract" thing, yup

and loved that last sentence...
HaleeYes chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Love it! Please continue as soon as possible. Thanks :)
CompleteSolitude chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I really wanna read this story now! Please write it!
birdofshade chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Very interesting start...really hope you keep it up...

the Casey thing threw me for a loop though, lol. And i'm pumped for your other stories (IB/OCs) too!
MeshXlace chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Oh my gosh I LOVE this. Please use it as a prologue or something. I want to here more :)
LizzySkellington chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I like this story.
i' chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I like it! It sound like it'll be an interesting ride! Can't wait for the story to get put in motion!
brokenwriter chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I think you guys should write out the whole story so that I can read it! )
shiro63 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
wonderful, just wonderful. A reader couldn't ask for anything better. Can't wait to see that Hugo/oc you mentioned, bet it will be just as good
Fire Black Dragon chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
un more of this Donny and Roxanna girl
patriotgirl101 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Really like the idea of this story. I can't wait to see where you go with it. Please update soon!