Reviews for Give and Take
Pandaskittles chapter 17 . 2/28
Just reread the story after a few years and I still love it I can feel every emotion the characters do and please please please please update I love this story sooooooooooooooooo much it took me sometime to re-find it though but please update I need to know what happens next.
Guest chapter 17 . 1/15
I hope that you can upgrade this story soon. I'm in love with it. (:
HMP chapter 17 . 1/14
Gah! The dramamamama! And Lee! Oh My Gosh, Lee I love you and all your little birdlike tendencies! You updated and I'm so happy and just - FEELS.
HMP chapter 16 . 1/14
OMG I can click the next button, YEAH! Love the drama - hope Shika and Neji can patch this up. Also, btw, you've totally hooked me on this ship - permission to come aboard, sir/miss?
tineyninja chapter 5 . 1/6
I love Shika in this!
Tinusica chapter 17 . 12/29/2014
Oh my Buddha, slutty pants in Chapter14 were SO unexpected! Seriously...I did not see that coming...and as a result I laughed so much I actually fell from the stool. :D Reeeaaally good reading, even though I am not into yaoi that much, this story really had me captivated from beginning. Every chapter is so intriguing, funny and new. Characters seem as real as manga/anime characters can ever get.
Oh, and I absolutely agree with the idea of Kakashi's "role reversal" between the public and the personal life, I mean the thing that when someone is given too much of a burden of responsibility, he must compensate for it somewhere else (otherwise he could just end up insane).
Simply said excellent work! :)
HerMemoriesErased chapter 17 . 10/27/2014
So...you should probably update soon. I need it. BADLY! Absolutely love this story and the way you've written everything. Good job!
HerMemoriesErased chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
I'm not usually into Yaoi (that's what it's called, right?), but I really like this. So far, Aoba is my favourite character in this story, especially with his last line in this chapter
manekineko77 chapter 17 . 10/23/2014
Wow, this is a really interesting story, nice to see it being (mostly) finished. I like the way you portray the two main idiots and their falling in love.
And the sex is hot, too. ;)
But Iruka's wandering pants are my favourite. I wonder who'll end up wearing them in the last chapter. :P
Meisa-tan chapter 17 . 6/15/2014
Oh! The story's almost over! I hope you update again soon! I'm excited to see how it ends for all of them. :)
Meisa-tan chapter 14 . 6/15/2014
Ooh! Kakashi's back! I'm eager to read the next chapter, but first let me just say that you should refer to ninjas by calling them "ninjas" or "shinobi" and not "nin". "Nin" by itself is very rarely used to refer to ninjas. It actually means "endurance" instead if the kanji for it is read as "nin" and it is not attached to another kanji (i.e. genin, sannin). :P

Other than that, in one of the earlier chapters you spelled Guy's name as "Gai". Just choose one spelling for consistency. :)

Anyway, I'm really enjoying the series so far! The smut is very, very hot, and all the feels you make me feel (both good and bad) are amazing.
Meisa-tan chapter 6 . 6/14/2014
It's "compliment", not "complement". :P Other than that, I'm enjoying the story so far!
Eluminel chapter 17 . 5/20/2014
Holy jezaz f*ck! You have NO IDEA how happy I was when I knew you updated, finally! Welcome back!

And this was an amazing chapter! The Neji thing really made me spit out my tea. And it's great, oh gosh just great. I will, if I get the time sometime soon, make some fanart pieces. Usually I don't do it with FanFictions but I will really do it. The other person that made me want to paint FanArt to her stuff's Okami Rayne.

That's how much I love and loved this story. I hope Shikamaru and Neji will solve things 3
It's heartbreaking. And I love you Sasuke version, or rather everyone actually. It just fits.
Zortus Lupus Rex chapter 17 . 5/19/2014
I've just read the whole story a few days ago for the n-th time. I couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw new chapter and you’ve still got me hanging on a f**king cliff since the previous one :) Now I’m going to read it once again because of the changes you’ve made :) I still remember my first time with ‘GaT’, I was reading all night and it was the only thing I could think about at work. It’s quite heartbreaking that there’s just one chapter left.
I've always liked Genma and he mated with Kakashi is awesome, though Shikamaru and Neji are definitely my favorite pairing ever. Their relationship in your story is one of the most thrilling I’ve read and their lovemaking scene is significant for me and it gives me chills everytime. I love such bitter plots.
You’ve earned my high respect for continuing this fic after such a long time. I believe it was really hard. Best regards!
Tai Black chapter 17 . 5/18/2014
omg. I can't believe my FAVORITE kakagen fic IS BACK!
Starkblack,, you have NO idea how many times I checked your profile here in ffnet and in y-gal to make sure you didn't updated it without me noticing. I'm SO HAPPY THAT YOU'RE BACK TO IT!
Gosh, and what a way to catch your readers back, heh? poor neji! and Kakashi said he loves Genma *-* All I want is for them to go back to Konoha and to neji and shika talk and please work things out! gah, I dunno, I think I'll read it all again to have the plot alive in my head for the further chapters. BRILLIANT CHAPTER! _
Pretty please, don't take too long to update! your writing is magic and your fic is amazing! THANK YOU VERY MUCH, LOVE! :D
xxxx tai
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