|Reviews for Embers|
| Guest chapter 91 . 4/22
I just finished it, and it was amazing I really enjoyed it
| objectivepersona chapter 91 . 4/22
This has got to be the all time most epic novel I have ever read, second to none fanfic. After reading this I don't think I can continue to read superficial protagonist stories online anymore, but I don't regret it, because by teaching me the difference between a wonderfully written plot and a caricature of it I'm sure the next story I read will be at least this good.
| Gabi1994 chapter 19 . 4/21
I don't really know how but you're making my cry over zuko, this is lovely, your world is lovely, iroh is so well done I am without words, furthermore you're creativity with possibilities and linkages is about to make me rewatch the series all over again
| fireball900 chapter 91 . 4/21
A brilliant story 10/10.
Though I must say my favourite part? When quarter-way through, I wondered how much had been written. So I looked at top, saw 750K words, and *complete*.
One of the best fanfics I've ever read, well done.
| Whyhow chapter 5 . 4/18
I also always wondered why firebending was so different from the other elements in so many ways... I'm not entirely convinced by portrayal of Iroh, but the rest seems spot on.
| Whyhow chapter 1 . 4/18
This is a very interesting idea and I can't wait to see where it goes. I think that most AUs don't have enough consequences of the changes and that exploring how much of a difference one little change can make is often the most interesting part.
| fireball900 chapter 35 . 4/18
Yeah, that's why I never like stories with naive protagonists - lack of consequences.
| AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 33 . 4/18
| fireball900 chapter 19 . 4/17
Huojin is *definately* Gordon... he's got that same 'I'm listening to criminals plan to break into law enforcement... I feel like I should be doing something about this...' air about him.
| fireball900 chapter 16 . 4/17
I *love* Iroh. One of my favourite strategists in Fiction, my favourite character in Avatar, and you're portraying him *perfectly.*
| fireball900 chapter 11 . 4/17
I love the comparison of skill levels you're pulling off. It really puts things into persepctive.
As does Zuko's anaylysis of the Avatar's & friends' 'accomplishments.' It's the reason I follow Avatar fanfic but not the show itself (like with Naruto) - I can't stand naive main characters. Especially 'do not kill' types who then take actions that *indirectly* kill *more* people (like the aforementioned ice/sea, or the plague-scare, or...). Especially when the *consequences* never pop up.
One idea I had for a fanfic ages ago, was to grab a character from a show and give him a single superpower - the ability to see *consequences.* Like 'what happens if I simply leave this bandit tied up when I leave... He carries on killing other people."
| fireball900 chapter 10 . 4/17
Until this chapter, I was thinking 'good, but especially compelling' - while good writing, there was nothing that stood out enough to make me read the entire thing.
But this 'refuge' idea...
Consider me interested.
| AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 30 . 4/13
So far still awesome no matter how many times i read this over again
| AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 26 . 4/12
Awesome so far
| YuniG chapter 1 . 4/12
I just noticed that my emojis are missing:(