Amazing story.

Ohmy god what a masterpiece, incredible worldbuilding right to the end and a satisfying ending with twists i never saw coming sprinkled all through!

Well, it was a good/great story for quite a while but there are too many inconsistencies for me to keep reading. The following are two such examples.

The odds are actually really good that Chin was the only person to die, you're making an assumption that the rest of that land was farmland (or that it hadn't been evacuated if it was) or that there may have been people in those forests. After all, Kyoshi didn't kill a single other member of Chin's army. Which is also inconsistent with how you portray her handling of these pirates, after all if she didn't resort to lethal force against Chin and his army why would she resort to lethal force against pirates?

There is also Zuko's claims that Katara attempted to kill him in one of the previous chapters, and for someone who fights as fiercely as Zuko does and flings around fire he doesn't have any room to talk.

Re-reading this bit, Ba Sing Se is very very lucky only Haima-Jiao came to cause havok. I mean, for their crime, if Koh were to take action, no other spirits will raise a hand to stop him. And their only hope would be if Aang himself forgives them and took action.

i saw that star wars reference i see you loving the story so far

Cute story. It was nice.

Damn, Fire Lord and The Dragon got nerfed hard. In canon The Fire Lord just pointed his hand in a direction during the Day of The Comet and everything ceased to be there. Trees, land, water, etc. Gone in a wave of heat.

The Fire Lord and A Dark Dragon said to be as strong as a Fire Lord couldn't even barbeque a tiny little nation of like 50 people? That's wild to me. They got nerfed hard for the plot.

Still a good story though. Just reads like a comic book or anime plot. "This character is the strongest around and the protagonist can't even hope to match them, until they face the protagonist at a time when we need them to win dramatically."

"Zuko has no way of winning this and won't finish off his father. He's lacking in power, lacking in numbers, and lacking in willingness to actually fight the enemy. His allies are about to be slaughtered but he has a thin thin thin chance of surviving. Let's introduce an evil spirit dragon that's stronger than the fire lord they already have no chance against, that sounds like a good ideaAuthor

Mate, just kill off Zuko at this point. There's no way he survives this without plot armor.

Iroh offered up Zuko like a sacrificial lamb with his prayers. Turned him into a catalyst for change, and is now confused by the changes in his nephew that continue to occur. He made him into this with his actions, regardless of intent. The spirits take their tithe.

I love it. Great chapter.

This is a good story. If somewhat confusing at times.

Communication and understanding are great skills to have, but some of the characters aren't the best at it. Great story, regardless.

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Ayyyy lmao. Azula is finding out what it's like to be Zuko.

I really hope that Shidan doesn't die for Azula. It'd be such a copout.

The spooky antagonist surviving while you kill off an actually likeable character? I hope it doesn't happen.

I really hope this dragon kills both Ty Lee and Azula. They deserve nothing less.

They'll probably be saved by plot armor though.

Why does Zuko want to save Azula or love her? You'd think he'd be smarter.