I am really enjoying this. Your combination of Japanese/Chinese mythology and I guess a little bit of Welsh law *snicker* is very, very absorbing. And then you go and do character introspections of Zuko from Iroh's POV. This is more fun than humans should have when reading.

Keep writing!

This is a very thought provoking story. I'll be looking out for your updates!

~Reiki

*Is still lurking and enjoying the story immensely.*

Very nice. Your latest chapter is enthralling. So Zuko can fight spirits now, that's pretty cool. Azula is a twisted little demon, will she feature in any chapter? Since they found what seems to be Appa's fur, will he go Avatar-chasing again? Can't wait for more and always hoping you'll continue your Bleach/Buffy stories.

Oh wow, you just have the most amazing mind, I never could of imagined the story leading here. They never catch a break, and I feel like joining Iroh in lynching a few sprits myself, *evil cliffhanger* Can't wait for you to write more soon, oh Queen of the crossover.

I like the way you describe the spiritual level of the story. It's more plausible than the original story.

Excellent chapter.

Good fight scene, I like the mount (always thought they were like chocobos) and the loyalty theme is very well thought out.

This was really interesting, I enjoyed this chapter a great deal, especially the interaction.

"Lin was whimpering, too pale to scream, and Zuko would never be so heartless as to leave her unprotected.

An Earth Kingdom woman. A peasant, and at least reluctant accomplice to murder. And the prince of the Fire Nation offered her mercy.

I have won, brother, Iroh knew, quiet pride warming him. The battle will be long and dark, and he may doubt himself - but he will never be yours again."I really enjoyed this quote in particular, as it really shows the changes in Zuko, as well as the differences between him and his father.

I really like the descriptions of anger in this chapter, the contrast between Iroh mentioning it as a mark of a good leader and the omnidirectional fury of the kamuiy. There really is a world of difference between getting angry and staying angry, isn't there?

Yay, more of Embers! This was a really awesome chapter- I love it when you create reasonable explanations for strange canon facts, like how few Fire Nation people are disloyal. And yay for Iroh's continuing awesomeness!

while I must admit that any good Uncle and Zuko story warms the cockles of my heart, I don't think I've run across the idea of Zuko as Healer. That's awesome! I also think you've got a great handle on both their mind-sets. Keep up the good work. :)

This is really good. I LIKE this. Please update, You have no idea how hard it is to find a "Zuko goes good wit Iroh, and using ForeBending for a good purpose" fic. But maybe you do?

0.o'

Please update soon!

You are very, very good at looking into the underlying thoughts and motivations of characters.

I'm enjoying Iroh's analysis of Zuko very much, and the way Zuko's view on the world shifts bit by bit, with him dragging his feet every step of the way. XD Also, the healy thing keeps being lovely.

I hated that they didn't do more with the aspect of fire in the show. I'm very interested in seeing where you go with this, and I like what you've got so far. Zuko's psyche is like a minefield, and most authors either load him with angst or villianize him. I like seeing the cracks that run through him, and how his uncle sets about fixing them.