Yes, Leonard acting as you portrayed him in this story is believable and actually almost completely true to "canon" for his character as the series played out over the years. Penny also would have beaten him to a pulp for calling her a slut and for lying about what Sheldon actually said about their encounter. Penny would have been a little more upset with Sheldon as well, but otherwise the story was well told and very enjoyable.

That was fun.

Awesome short story, I loved it.

Dani

Sheldon starts OOC in the first two chapters but he definitely gets in-character in the second half of the story. Anyway the story is great: the plot, the hot love scene - from two different perspectives - Penny confronting Leonard and the happy Shenny ending.

I really love this!

So beautiful revenge against that $$#0le

this was good as long as he treats penny right.

Bellissimo! I would have loved to see it in the show, great job!

Oh would that it had happened that way! Battr dipped the corn dog!? That's a new one for me. Thanks so much

i really like the story

i really like

fantastic end

I love Shenny! Good story. :)

I loved this. I wish that it had turned out this way on the show, but oh well, there's always fanfiction, right? LOL! Well done and I can't wait to read more of your writing soon.

Beautiful! Thank the fanfiction gods for rec/favorite lists because I never would have found this gem otherwise. The interactions worked out great and yes, I *can* see Leonard being that bitchy at having his favorite toy taken away. Thanks so much for sharing!

CT.

Holy shit! Evil Sheldon is a turn on!