|Reviews for Youth and Innocence|
| The Golden Fire-Lily chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I really enjoyed this. I've not really been reading Team Tobirama fics for a long time, but this struck me as quietly amusing while leaving it open to the reader to fill in the gaps you tactfully left, suggesting things implicitly.
This was a lovely fic. I can really see Hashirama sitting down and writing up this list, keeping it formal and yet you somehow made it so humourous.
I love how you depicted the... oh, what's the word... I can't recall it at this moment in time. The closest I can think of is the 'interaction of Team Tobirama with each other', but that's really not what I'm aiming for. I hope you understand what I mean, anyway.
| wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
what is the list of substances they can't have
| Leona DragonBlood Aero chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Ha ha ha ha ha! True there SHOULD be more Team Tobirama fics if they are as funny as this! Maybe a sequel should be in order to tell about WHY and the many other things they are explesively NOT allowed to have . . .
| MaisieTheBird chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
LOL this was hilarious!
| whiterae chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Loved it! So funny.
| Jessica Black1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
man that was really funny
| Kunai-sama chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I loved numbers 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, and 20... especially the porn
and LOL #20...
| Drunken Nukenin chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Hilarious! Good work.
| Willow-Bee the Cat chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
| VA23 chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Very entertaining. I'm a fan of Tobirama so it's always a joy to find a well written (albiet short) story involving him and his students. Just goes to show that even legends were young once.
| Sarah1281 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
This was great...I love thinking how bizarre they could be as kids and how uptight they grow up to be. And number seven...I bet they were just continuing along that vein when Danzo took them seriously and roped poor Itachi in... :p
| SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
That was hilariously brilliant gold. I loved it. Awesome work.
| Rena the pirate jedi wizard chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Hahahahahaha! Oh, this was so funny! I loved it! All the different little personal things about each character was great. And the ones that had more than one point to the new rules were so funny.
| Alchemist Astrid chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
...Okay. Wow. That was by far the most messed up fic I have read in quite a while...
...I love it!
Do you plan on expanding this any further?
| GoodyTwoShoes chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
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