|Reviews for Hardycest|
| ILoveAnnaKendrick77 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
I kind ok liked it...ok...I loved it. Is it wrong to love hardycest so much?
| EXPANDYOURIMAGINATION chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
yea i liked it alot, but u need to go back and redue the story if u want i can help, everything else looks fine its just the grammer and the misspelling, its hard to write a story ur first time, but when u look at other stories being done, u can get inspiration and be able make ur next stories look even better but over all wonderful job
| Nooks chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
It was cute. pretty good. But one suggestion, maybe get a Beta reader? to help with the errors and mis-spelt words!
| redsandman99 chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
That does sound like something I would make James do -lol-
To anyone who's wondering and bothers to look at these reviews besides the author: yes, permission to use James was asked and it was granted.
| NeroAnne chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Uh, did you ask Redsandman is you could use her character? If you didn't, I suggest you ask. You're not supposed to use them unless you're given permission.
Other than the spelling mistakes, grammar errors, I think it was alright. Nice sex scene.