Reviews for From the Corner
devilshalo98 chapter 27 . 7/27/2011
hey ya! J'aimé votre histoire! Brillant travail, continuez comme ça. Severus et Ophélie sont trop adorables ensemble. J'aime la façon dont Hermione ne pouvez pas obtenir que Rogue est un père! * gasp * haha, thanks for an amazing read!
citrinestone1000 chapter 43 . 7/26/2011
Glad to know that Severus thought he had to pay for his needs because of who is and what he has done. I guess a pet peeve of mine is when authors treat Snape as so ugly that no one would find him attractive. As the saying goes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Great chapter.
rasaaabe chapter 66 . 7/19/2011
I love your fic, it's simply perfect.

The relationship between Severus and Ophelia is adorable, I really enjoy seen Snape like a father. The little witch is a little treasure and it want see in every chapter.

Hermione's parents are really cool, both are really nice and hot at the end xD.

The rest of the main character (Hermione, Rose, Hugo and Mary) also have my completely adoration.

Thanks for write that perfect story about sons, daugthers and parents.

Greeting and see you.
Hunter Memoir chapter 66 . 6/28/2011
I have one word, really. WOW! One of the best written if not THE BEST story I have ever read. You are a talented writer. I love the story.
NamuNamu chapter 5 . 6/16/2011
Wow. This is awesome. I especially love reading Ophelia's point of view. What an interesting story!
junewilliams7 chapter 66 . 6/13/2011
I've just reread this story this past week and have enjoyed it very much. You create such wonderful original characters! I even love little Zoe who doesn't do much except be cute. Thanks for sharing your talents with us!
masho chapter 66 . 6/3/2011
yay i really want to thank you for writing this as its great and it made me really happy and ..

anyway, its and awesome fic.

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its a nicer SS/HG than most, and Ophelia is really cute, I get her.

Hugo is so cute:DD
Autumn Willow chapter 66 . 5/30/2011
Hello!

First off, I would like to say that I agree, that was such an endearing and adorable story. The children and the grandparents (including Mary) were delightful, and I absolutely adore your characterization of Snape. I love the dynamics between Snape and Hermione. It just made me feel all warm and fuzzy and I appreciate how you tried to stick to Snape's character while still being able to make him the endearing one that you have here. Ahh! This might just be one of my favorite Snapes ever. :D

Anyway, your English is quite good, however, there were multiple recurring errors one of which is with the use of pronouns. I have found that you tend to mix the pronouns a bit, using the male pronoun for a female and vice versa. There were also times when the wrong verb were used. These mistakes, however, are really understandable and is just something that I would like to point out to you should you ever think of polishing your story. Since I quite like your story (definitely adding it to my faves), I would also like to see it polished if you should so wish. I would even go and offer to help if you'd like, but no pressure. :) This story is still as endearing as ever and definitely something I would re-read in the future. :)

Vielen Dank! I'm looking forward to reading your other works! :)
nygirl1342 chapter 66 . 5/28/2011
I loved it. I loved Ophelia. I loved how honestly you portrayed Snape. Your story was so good, i couldnt choose the review button over the next button, i had to keep reading! 3
aerialla1 chapter 66 . 5/28/2011
Incredibly wonderful, well written and paced story. Your portrayal of Severus was darn near perfect and extremely believable. Thank you so much for this lovely story.
Thunder-Goddess-905 chapter 66 . 5/27/2011
This was such a good story! I truly enjoyed it and pretty much obsessively read for two days straight. Good job!
Katamabob chapter 66 . 5/18/2011
This is very possibly the most adorable story I've ever read. There were so many moments - mostly near the start, when Severus just began to realise that he loved Ophelia - where I had to stifle an audible 'awwwwwww...' at the beautiful moments. So cute!

And the ending was lovely. I liked the slowly building respect and then quick romance, and I adored how you didn't steal the focus away from the children even then. They remained so central to the story. This seems more than a typical romance. It's family :) I loved Ophelia. She's lovely. And her life was so sad :( But I think Severus' love for her is beautiful, and how much she adores him. And I love Hugo. And I, personally, think being a muggle is kind of awesome ;) I love it.

I think... I think some of the Weaseleys may have been out of character, or had their characters exaggerated. But then, I've always been a blatant Ron/Hermione shipper, and tend to disagree with any harsh view of Ron, so I'll leave that there, I think xD

Did you say in an author's note that English is not your first language? That's amazing. You have a narrative gift, it seems, that will guide you through telling stories in tongues other than your own. But your grasp of the English language is astonishingly good. You're much better than many native speakers I know at writing in it...

I think you might be, occasionally (especially at the start), misusing dashes. Sometimes they were used in the place of ellipses (...). But it's hard to remember a specific example.

I loved the story, it was beautiful and expertly written. Well done!

Kate
jazzy2may chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
loved this a lot! it was romantic and perfect. a slow and in-depth and believable story. loved it.
ashley chapter 7 . 4/12/2011
Counter clockwise is the word not anti clockwise lol
jjunee chapter 66 . 4/12/2011
It's a wonderful, a beautiful story. I like to read it.
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