Reviews for Stars
sandy chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
it was so cute definitely keep it going I want to know what will happen next will lizzie try to ge with doon what will doon do
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
Keep it going!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
I'm guessing this is going to be a pregnancy story
jelly bean chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
KEEP GOING PLEASE! THAT WAS SOOO GOOD!
T'Liana chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I think this is better as a one-shot. It was a great read :)
Kaz Toru chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Are you ever going to update this? It's rather adorable, I really hope you continue it!
thepageofspace chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
At first, I'm like: Wait, WTH just happened? Then i read the scentence of: And so they were dressed, and- Then i'm like, OMG- Oh... OOOH... OMG EWW! Anyway, continue please :D
MMMMCCCCCCCCCCCC chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
OH MY GERSH...No comment...I am sorta like grossed out but how bout i imagine they were in their underwear...it was gross...BLEH
Superman's Y-Fronts chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
If you still write fanfics, this is a really good start :) I know that it was while ago you wrote this but I wanna know what happens.
ImpossiblyIzzy chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Do write more!
CBonnett chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I no there's little hippie for this story since its like three years old...but please continue /3
Lakeycreek Rd chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
hey sorry to be so critical but ewwww. why did they do that? i liked what he said to her. soooo sweet, but when lizzie saw what happened and i did read about it i got kinda grossed out. and they were... ewww. again sorry for being so critic like but i had an oppinion. my oppinion was that it was all a dream that doon had. sorry but it was gross.
TruIdentity chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Keep going plz plz plz
TruIdentity chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Keep going plz plz plz
cookiemonster345 chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Um...I hope you finish this story soon. I like a lot.
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