Reviews for Between the Sun and the Moon
crazycats7 chapter 28 . 1/14/2014
You still should have off Tanya. I don't like her
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 34 . 11/1/2013
this was a great story but I still wished you would write the third part to this stor you are such a great writer if feels like I am right there wth them know them I think you know what I mean please think about
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 33 . 11/1/2013
PLEASE I DONT WANT THIS TO END I REALLY WANT YOU TO WRITE THAT THIRD PAT TO THIS STORY YU CANT JUST LEAVE THEM HANGING YOU KNOW HOW MUCH WE LVE THEM AND YOUR WORK EVEN IF EDWARD IS A DORK SOME TIMES
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2013
so what is really up with Aro is he a bad guy or what?
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 32 . 11/1/2013
I guess it's nice to go out in your back yard and have sex good thing the cameras aren't stll hounding them isn't it
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 31 . 11/1/2013
well that was one way to close the sadness he was feeling and hold her close at the same time
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 30 . 11/1/2013
well it is not like Felix did it on purpose he just told his wife they were coming home it was not for money or out of spite
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 29 . 10/31/2013
ok I want to know where James mother is if she is still alive I don't mean Victoria I mean Laurent's wife or what ever she was. is she alive or dead or one of those that had be made slaves of.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 28 . 10/31/2013
don't tell me you are going to have Tanya throw her self at Edward or Tanya tell Bella they were together but Bella already know about that nothing happened between them
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 27 . 10/31/2013
no shit cockblock again and in a big way by the Feds. damn what's up now
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 26 . 10/31/2013
so if later down the line when she tries for their little girl she could get twins again[snicker]
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 25 . 10/31/2013
fnny I thought reporter check at police reports all the time guess theses dont
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 24 . 10/31/2013
well I had part of it right but Victoria was involved it in too just not on purpose lets hope Edward gets to the hospital on time and they catch Laurent
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 23 . 10/31/2013
well I thnk it is Victoria and Laurent don't ask me why but I do
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 22 . 10/31/2013
I am so happy for her and the thought of them having another baby another girl and yes I would be so happy if you wrote a third part to this story it just seems fitting don't you think I do THANK YOU
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