|Reviews for Outliers|
| xxLunaTerraxx chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Again, you write Hojo so damn well! I applaud your greatness. :3
I also like how you wrote Lu as a willing participant in the whole thing. I personally believe she was and, while I can see her having some small amount of guilt over it all at the very end, I certainly don't see her as a sniveling woman who was forced or tricked into anything.
| Myshu chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Great! Your character studies are the best things, sometimes.
This is an excellent take on a guy who practically defines the RPG mad scientist archetype. You've turned a sociopath into a success story, and it's compelling in a really surprising way-pathos for Hojo would have never occured to me before I read that very last section. I think the best part was that he was never sorry-he was PROUD of everything.
(One sentence rang strangely to me:
'He mentally cursed as he realized the tasks that probably lay ahead of him in the Logistics department'
Maybe it needs a closer?)
Lucrecia's last laugh was nice food for thought, too, and rounded off the story well. Good work!
| Aeriths-Rain chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
wow, very well written and interesitng!