|Reviews for Beautiful liaisons|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
definitely a pairing you dont see everyday, i like that you went there. now b/c my loyalties are always with edward i was upset for him. his relationship with esme was stormy it would seem, fighting and drinking and being treated like he would become his father is never a good thing so right there i felt for edward. don't get me wrong, i feel for esme too. being left for a younger woman/being left at all is heartbreaking and from what little we know she isn't handling it all that well and i get reaching out for some comfort and love and jake was sitting there with his junk out hahahaha but here is where i think jake is wrong. he thinks edward is upset that his mother moved on and maybe the age thing BUT i think it was more the fact that his BEST friend just slept with his MOTHER. he crossed a line and the fact that he isn't getting along wiht his mother wouldn't help matters b/c you would think his bff would be on his side (or what not), you would think jake would know what is going on with edward and his situation and maybe be there for him but now he'll be there for esme instead...betrayal is a word that comes to mind. as his best friend he should have known better. sorry jake, i am not on your side. esme should have know better too.
great o/s clearly b/c i got so involved in it :) maybe a little more in the future?...perhaps :)
looks like a cougar got herself a wolf hahahaha
| jpmoonlight chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
hell whoa... Esme and Jake... Naughty and new... that was first... but i think new is good... jake's always nice and good...
was the girl with edward bella?
| Twilightsatellite chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Wow...just...wow I didn't see that coming Esme/Jacob? The summary intrigues a lot but doesn't give away anything! I never wanted to read a non-pairing fic because I thought It'd be too strange but yovr story is so amazingly good I feel sort of cured of my prejudices! Thanx! I truly hope you expand it!
| AnahyR chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
wow, this is the first Jacob Esmee fan fic I've ever read and it's awesome, well I don't have enough words to describe it, I loved it.
you said you might continue working on it and I can see an excellent story here!
I'll wait for it!
| Mambomama chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Yeah. A bit of a different pairing, but it strangely didn't squick me out. I guess my mind is more open, these days. Hahaha!
| Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
They make a good duo, even if Jake is sleeping with Edward mom. Make this a full story so we can get more Jedward action.
| Lindsi loolabell chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
yey, it won Kelli. Way to kick arse
| Lindsi loolabell chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Ok, Wow, totally didn't expect Jake and esme. Shocker. Loved it though hehe
| NajaPapaya chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
I have waited so long for an update... Cmon update already... There is no telling where this story will go from here... But its kind of realy good, so puullezze Update soon :-)
| JessicaLovezU chapter 2 . 11/25/2009
please write more! i need to know what happens next!
| apple of eve chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Wow, a little suprize there!
great little story!
| Morgan Emrys chapter 2 . 11/1/2009
Damn so late with this but I'm still leaving a review but WO that's great that you won first place (and I see why you pick the most interesting pair that I have ever read Esme/Jake pure -f*cking genius) and I seriously want you to continue because I'm very curious as to what's going to happen if you make this a multi-chapter.
| JasmineeCullen chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
you should carry this onee on its well god. :) x
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
You really need to go on with this story. It is done perfectly and you are very talented. I am hooked and need the next chapter...soon. Please. Also Esme and Jake I wouldn't have paired them together but I am really seeing it happen. It's a mark of a great writer when they can bring the reader right into the story and you have done that, my friend.
| weasleymadchen chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
congratulations for winning the SOB challenge :)
i have to say that this was a little bit hard to read for me .. cuz the pairing is .. really different .. i'm not sure if a like it or not .. but i enjoy the way you wrote about jacob and edward .. and the girl that keep saying she was the soulmate of Ed .. (.. Bella?) LOL