Reviews for Burning
Vallarii chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
somehow i was glad it ended there. i might be more happier if it ended in cloud's pov so i wouldn't dread the ending part. lol. it's just,.. oh well. the story is so cute anyways.
StyxxsOmega chapter 10 . 7/31/2011
awww. i wanna read more... please write more in this fan fiction. please?
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
OMG!NOOOOES!But thank god,you jsut kept it till the burning part,loved the way things went,Really excellent work here!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 9 . 10/3/2010
OOHHH!That was nice really!Oh wai,is the Nibelheim incident coming in the next chapter?then i have to cry a little!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 8 . 10/3/2010
Aww,that was so cute,loved the way Zack was so happy!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 7 . 10/3/2010
Huwaaaaaa!*dies in happiness*

OMG,that kiss was perfect!All that food,really Zack...but wow,you did it again,lovely work!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 6 . 10/3/2010
OOOHHHH!That was great!They're going out lalalalalla!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
Oh man,Genesis just said that didn't he?He's so utterly amazing!Oh wow,Zack trying to help out Cloud was cute,and Sephiroth was awesome!Love it again!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 4 . 10/3/2010
Aww no way,they didn't get to kiss yet!But taht makes it all the more interesting!huuhuuuhuuu!lovvvvelay work!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
OMG!Stupid Zack,what was that?He didn't even realize about Cloud getting crazy!But that was so cute,that last part,he's going to take care of him!YYAYYAYA!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Awwww,Cloud' sure was cute like that,all scared and shy!Hehhe!jsu awesome work with his emotions,love it!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Oh wow!Zack's being naughty,but i really liked how he expected his name to be something different,cool!Oh poor Cloud,chocobo head,hehe!
Kiti Renentine chapter 10 . 10/1/2010
Oh and then you go and make the actual ending sad! Well I'm not going to think about what comes next...just bask in the adorable cuteness of the boys together!

Wonderful job, I really enjoyed this story from beginning to end!
Kiti Renentine chapter 9 . 10/1/2010
Aww that was so cute! The happy ending they deserve!

Lovely story, dear!
SHA260 chapter 10 . 9/16/2010
So sweet, sad to see it end.
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