Reviews for The Nymph and the Warrior
Yu chapter 4 . 10/22/2016
please continue this story! It's so much potential and I love the theme. There's something in me that really wants them to be in love, but that will take some time and please make Johan disappear gosh I really dislike him ;) Lucius could be cold and kinda cruel in the beginning but then he falls in love and he becomes soft(er),,,well at least for Harry. Please make Harry stubborn but fragile, I find that really cute and fun to read. All in all this story got SO MUCH potential and you made a great start so pleasssee write some more cuz I really enjoyed it! Thank you~ :)
SunshineBubbles chapter 4 . 3/28/2016
its been so long since you updated that you've prob abandoned this story but i hope u update one day coz i live it so much
Guest chapter 4 . 8/10/2015
I like how this story is going so far but I wished you had done a prequel of sorts about harry growing up, being banished and how he came to live in the forest outside of Lucius' kingdom.
jeanette9a chapter 4 . 7/8/2013
have you been thinking so long? and still have no idea?
KLS-Blueskies chapter 4 . 1/1/2013
Heres an idea make it so that it turns out that they need to be in love for him to get full imortality but because he didn't know they had sex and (don't know if u r ok with things like this i just started reading ur stories this is the first one) but he should get pregnant
Guest chapter 4 . 12/18/2012
Just puttin it out there you are a mean mean person for leavening an awesome story.
musme chapter 4 . 3/19/2012
despite I love this fic, I definitely hate cliffie!...
Nomore1234 chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
it's a really interesting story, i hope ya update soon.
inuyasha1kougafan101 chapter 4 . 7/1/2011
please complete the story so that I may find out if Lucius survives or not! ur awesome!
Aralaiqualasse chapter 4 . 5/6/2011
hmmm...maybe let Harry hate him first for few days, then lucius got angry and let harry be in isolation what so ever, that Johan will attempt rape again but save by harry's family before it happen. then harry will be bring back to his home then lucius will regret, but will ahve to waste a long time to get harry back, but i do not worry since lucius is immortal soon?

hehehe, no johan rape harry o...
Capius chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
Great story! Any chance you'll put up the next chapter soon?
writerlover101 chapter 4 . 9/30/2010
poor harry! update soon!
BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
Well this is definitely different. I can't wait to see how this plays out!

SalomSoul chapter 4 . 9/6/2010
make 'em go at it like a couple of bunnies, i say! yay, this is so cute!
thephantomcat chapter 4 . 9/5/2010
The next stage shoued be coruting, like flowers and moonlight walks. As you can tell, im a girl.
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