|Reviews for What Happens in Pepper City|
| Shizzy92 chapter 1 . 2/23
I DON'T KNOW WHAT I JUST READ BUT I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT.
| KiwiWitch chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
This had me actually laughing out loud, great work
| orangepumpkins chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Hahaha this was definitely amusing XD
| Ness Frost chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
This was brilliant! I couldn't stop laughing the whole time I was reading it. I only wish that you'd shown the reactions of their parents - especially Vegeta. That would have been priceless.
| Lanfir Leah chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
That was hilarious. Thanks for sharing :D
| Megustamuffins chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
| Breezybiatch chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Hey! I wanted vegetas opinion!
| WindGoddess Rune chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Awesome story, just awesome story!:D
| ZWorld chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
This was awesome! Laughed SO much! You got them spot on 3 Haha! Well done! 10/10!
| ClockRepair chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
lol Oh my God, this was one of the most entertaining stories I've ever read! I just wished that there was a reaction from Goku and Vegeta when they found out their sons were married to each other. And damn, Goten's girlfriend sure is understanding. I would have totally freaked out and said, "Are you sure you want to keep seeing ME?" :P
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Oh... my... gosh... So glad I saved this until after Naptime. THIS WAS AWESOME! Especially Goten snapping and Gohan letting him at Trunks. This was awesome! And while I'm not usually one for cursing, this just seemed to make it even funnier. Awesome job!
| Piccolo is green chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
:D This is great!
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
LOLLLLLLL. Thank you for cheering me up the day before my final. Loved this. Also loved the ending and Pan's comment!
| chocolateblood chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
I avoid TrunksxGoten fics because my brain just can't handle it. Just not them x_x But this fic was hilarious. They're both idiots haha
| shaya10 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Oh my God! I have just found your fic a few days ago and I love it! I have a hard time to try to stop myself from laughing all the time xD I love Trunks and Goten, they are so cute and I love their frienship :p (I like yaoi but not really with those two)
what can I say about this story? I think you really did a great job with their characters and personnalities, I can easily imagine both of them doing these kind of stupid stuff! :D From dbz we don't really know about how Trunks and Goten are in their twenties but you did a great job by putting their friendship in that way :) I love it
I love the Trunks who grabs Goten into horrible/incredibe/ridiculous situations and I love how Goten always lets himself trapped so easily by Trunks. They both seem to be really nice guys, just always getting trouble because of pranks, but they are not mean or else - there are fics where Trunks seems to be a jerk... :/ but here, he is just a little foolhardy I love how they act just like a old couple and how imaginating they are when insulting each other (especially the "your ass is mine, bitch!" from Goten xD)
It was kind of scary to find so much money in the bathroom - I thought they did a bank robbery It was so funny to see Goten panicking completely because of the ring, then laughing because it seemed to be a joke, then panicking again because of the mariage licence xD I love the moment when he thought about Vegeta knowing the situation - "he is gonna kill me, and kill you, and I'm gonna kill you too, but we will be already dead!" hahaha poor Goten! it was so funny to read that! It was really funny to see him yelling - he inherited from his mother for sure! xD even Gohan does not yell like that xD
Trunks on the other side was really foolhardy - provoking Goten in situations like that? hahaha joking about sex and then about how he found Goten "so beautiful when angry" hahaha - I couldn't stop laughing! He's a genius, this guy! hahaha well, just like his mother I guess
I also love the reactions of other people - from the receptionist to the judge, without forgetting Gohan :D it was so funny when the receptionist said "congratulation" and ask them if they don't want to stay married xD and the judge! how perverted is he? no, how crazy is he? cause seriously, Goten was probably just scary, and still he was trying to... what? to flirt? xd
I love when you decribe the fact that, just as Gohan and Goku, Goten can be really dangerous when angry :D the style of your writting was really too much! :D I love how Goten lost his mind and how Trunks continues trying to joke and/or seem innocent :p I love when he thought that Goten angry entertainment xD Did I say I love how you figured out their friendship? :p
Then I love how Gohan just let his brother beat Trunks after getting the whole idea of what happened :p hahaha I can imagine Trunks' face when he heard that xD I love Gohan's last statement "just your Uncle Goten is an idiot" :p
Then I really enjoy the point of view of the lawyer - not surprise at all after all the stuffs going on with the Brief familly xD I like the fact that he knew Trunks very well and even counted the moment when Trunks would come back, realising that the lawyer he was talking about was in front of him and not somewhere outside :p
Really Goten deserved a revenge after all of this - and the whole scene about the divorce matter was really funny, as Trunks and Goten really looked like an old couple which is going to divorce xD I love the end when they decided to stay married just because the divorce thing is too complicated to do xD
Finally, the whole stuff reminded me a lot about the episode of Friends in which Rachel and Ross get married and then tried to divorce xD it was really nice and I think I will read your other stories too, even if it is yaoi :) doesn't matter cause your writting is nice and I like how you characterize Trunks and Goten :) Thanks a lot for this enjoying moment and good luck for your other stories :)
Hope I am understandable - I'm French and my English is not perfect :) see you!